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for Pretty to pretend

by bodanger

person evamber
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brilliant very angsty
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what do you mean should it just be lestrange? im confused with the question. anyway i love stories like this. but i usually find more with hermiione being blaise zabini's twin sister...but this story is good. i cant wait to find out more......also with hermione and draco..they'd be cousins...anymore MORE soon please

angela
person amyfeddy
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is this going to be an incest story because if i'm remembering correctly narcissa malfoy and belltrix(spelling?) are sisters (but i could be wrong) which would make hermione and draco cousins. Unless you're going to add another lestrange to the mix. Otherwise it could be off to a great start, just work on your line spacing, it was a little choppy. Good luck, can't wait to read more.
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like so far!
person lazart
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its a good start to your story, but when you post the next chapter could you space out the sentences a little more please? Just so it's easier to read. Update soon!