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for Pretty to pretend

by bodanger

schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I find it fascinating that she can go thru so many emotions so fast, i would be called bi-polar if it were me. Please let me know when you update next.

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schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i love your detailed descriptions! can't wait for the next update :)
person Chiquitaf16
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now this story is getting good, and that whole thing with Blaise going crazy and obssesive was oddly hot.
person Kohana_Moon
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your story! There are a few spots where its a little choppy, but not too bad all and all. So this is going to be a draco/Hermione love fic.....or will they be companions?......with them being first cousins, and although I know it is a common thing done in line breeding, usually its not first cousins. I think if you tweek the heritage part a bit it would smooth it out. Keep rudolphus and change the mother, that takes away some of the gross factor. Anyway its well nicely, and the plot has a lot of potentical
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I love angsty, dark and complicated stories. All too often a story may fit these descriptions then quickly turn fluffy and nothing upsets me more than when that happens.
person kohana_moon
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh I got it! make hermione the daughter of Rudolphus Lestrange and Belvina Burke. Belvina is Sirius Blacks sister, making her a pureblood. Also it allows you to explain away why belletrix signed the adoption papers....plus you can feed of of belletrix and sirius not likeing each other from his sister having an afffair with her husband. Belvina burke has 2 sons and a daughter who are never named......That would solve the whole incest thing without having to change anything
person Avivafae
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait for an update. I hope that's soon, we're just getting to the good parts.
person Claire
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
brilliant chapter, i am breathless :)
person rebroars
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like that Hermione's angel would look like Draco. I can't wait till she realizes that she is in fact alive in a tub with Draco. I'm wondering about their relationship to one another though. If there's not going to be incest. Someone going to have to have a different mum. Right? Blaise is crazy obsessed and I kind of like it. It'll be interesting to see future interaction between him and Draco, especially if Hermione's there to witness. Can't wait for another update!
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?