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for The Dark Gryffindor

by PensievePerson

schedule October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Seraphiccandy
person sjauthor
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear...she thinks it'll be a fun party! I doubt it, somehow!
person shez
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a serious caning! Valerie will be in pain for a while to come.

She was insane to say Voldemort's name though - I can see why Snape is raging.

So more horrors to come, eh? Eek!

(Oh, yes, my name is the one that shows up on my email ;)).
person sjauthor
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Valerie! Oh no, what have you done! :O
person shez
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! That certainly explains why nobody would want to utter the name of Voldemort. What the hell was she thinking?

But now she really is in deep. Voldemort wants to pass her around at Walpurgis Night - I guess there's nothing Snape can do about it without compromising his cover.
person shez
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snape is such a hero in these chapters! I feel so sad that Ginny and Neville will never know that it was him that healed them, or saved them.

Typical, eh, he gets no recognition, as usual.

Getting close to the closing chapters of DH now; I'm a little worried!
person sjauthor
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Great job. Very exciting!
person sjauthor
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, that was great! Loved his good deed!
person sjauthor
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting too. I really like to read the canon parts! It makes it all come together...
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's very interesting to see how canon is tying in with story - I like reading the Ginny and Neville bits, and thought you caught Hagrid's speech and character really well.

I can only imagine it's about to get really (even) darker soon; I almost wish it could be AU and Valerie could save his life...