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Ohhh, poor Valerie!
But she did say a really dumb thing. How could she say she wanted to join the Dark Lord after everything she has seen now? I guess because she wanted to upset Snape and show him how different she was from Lilly. But she couldn't possibly mean it.

I totally understand Snape being mad at her, and I hope he forgives her. And I hope Valerie forgives him for hurting her so much.

Ugh, bloody Lily. Valerie needs to cure him of that maudlin adolescent crush as soon as possible. I hope he wakes up to himself.

I certainly understand Snape's reaction. Who wouldn't throw up after an experience such as that? Fortunately, he had Valerie to take his mind of it...:) Although I am surprised she didn't throw up herself. She's pretty strong.

OMG at Voldemort's toilet etiquette! Did he learn that at the orphanage?! Ewwww!

It was interesting to read an account of how corpses become Inferi, and I thought the whole challenge to the Death Eaters to subdue them was creative.

That was one wild party. Does Voldemort have an events planner? I bet you could do that job.

Hi, just read up on the last couple of chapters so far! Thanks for all the caning and other punishments! They really got me excited! I do not dislike Valerie, but I love seeing her getting punished. -The thing with the banners was just wrong, she deserved everything she got ;)

I was so excited to get a gimps of Lucius! Thanks for that!
However the whole orgy was not my cup of tee (but you know that). Also a bit too much literal holocaust for my taste. It's fair enough to write about it but I guess for me mass killing, dead bodies and cannibalism just doesn't mix very well with sex and erotica. But hey, that is just me.
But then also, I was hoping the orgy would be hard on Valerie, maybe you still have something planned, but so far she is the only one getting out of it fairly well I think.

100 points for you for creativity with the Voldi and Nagini coupling! That was rather disgusting, but very creative!

Voldemort is one crazy guy. This reminded me of 'The Midsummer Coup' with the cymbals and the incense seeming to magically release brutish passions. It's interesting, because it makes you wonder if the brutality is really within them, or has Voldemort enchanted it into them? It seems as if they are compelled by forces outside them, as when Yaxley wanted to please LV by taking a Crucio, even though he had to lie about his loyalties to do it. Intriguing.

Those poor Muggles! And Voldemort's crew are such a bunch of sexists. I don't blame Bellatrix for being a bit pissed off.

She's going to get something to chew on later then, other than Voldemort's privates. Orgy scene next?

How touchy of you visitkarte...you remove your review? I did say thanks and I really did appreciate it. But that's alright...it's not like it matters. It's only one review isn't it? And anyway, in case you haven't noticed I have plenty of other reviews.

Let the ceremonies begin!

The Manor sounds very stately - like the sound of the gardens. Ah, and a 'call me Severus' moment - they are truly a couple now.

Hope the ensuing chapters aren't too hard on them!

Okay, I just read chap4 and I've been wondering if Valerie is going to get a bit more submissive...she's not really acting like it.I mean you only fight the imperio if you don't want to do something and why would she not want to go down on him? She should be eager to go down on him if she were really a sub. I mean yeah she would fight it a bit but he could just twist his hand in her hair and force her down. Why use magic like impereo if he can just tie her up with some ropes or handcuffs or something? I mean impereo takes away all the fun of the inner struggle that comes before ultimate submission...^^ Just saying.lol, not flamin just wonderin :)if i didn't like it i wouldn't have even left a comment. Oh and why isn't Sev a bit more experienced as a dom? He must have done this sort of thing before?