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Great chapter, pp - I like your superfreak Snape; he is that mix of hot and cold that makes him so compelling. It was fun the way Valerie got the giggles when he wanted her to suck him; I bet that happens to lots of girls. I'm sure it doesn't happen to Snape too often though!

You give Snape some explanation as well, in his conversations with Dumbledore, which gives it nice depth.

hey this is great! Quite crazy, yes, but very different and also hot! I love the way you write Snape! I love it when he is really cruel but also has a soft side. The mixture is explosive! And the girl is interesting, yes, actually I can quite relate to her.
It also is a very thrilling set up with Snape being Headmaster and Dark Arts being taught and all. I have hardly ever read a story where magic was so much involved in the erotic game and actually worked in a thrilling way!
And Dumbeledore's portait in the mix is a great idea!
And I agree, he would propably not have done such things with Lily. I imagine Lily was sort of like an Angel for Snape, someone he adored but someone who he felt dirty and bad and wrong to in comparison. He possibly loved her cause she was so pure. But to live out his dark side he needs someone who responds the right way, someone with a similar darkness.
Please more soon!

Wow, sadists of Hogwarts! Very intense, pp, but it's consensual. I like how the portraits can't handle it and disappear. Snape is very cruel, but it seems that Valerie can handle it.

Ooh, great start, pp. I'm sure some Snape-as-headmaster fics must have been written by now but this is the first one I've read.

I liked Carrow teaching the pupils to get the curses in first - and Dumbledore's little tear, awww.

Lovely caning scene - you spoil me! Snape such a gentleman, letting her keep her skirt, lol.

Really liked it! More please.

nice start........can't wait to read more.

Please update soon i'm so wanting more of your story, More soon'''