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SUggestion:
Change 'Hook' to Voldemort and 'Smee' to peter pettigrew.
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Ch. 4 Ooh, this is where things are going to get scary! I'm glad you're continuing this story although I'm wondering where Narcissa has gone. I'm sure that mystery will be cleared up as you carry on with this fascinating adaptation.

Great chapter!

I've never read the story about Peter Pan or watch animation, although I know what's going about. Nice idea to make a story, I wait for the new chapter ^^ And maybe is good that I've never read the original story 'cause now I don't know what will be next ;)

Ch. 3 I'd almost forgotten this story. But it's a very cute, sweet tale. I like the part about the flowers, too. It's like the lunch pails hanging off the trees in Oz. The description of the look, smell and taste of the petals was accurate and life-like; I could almost see them in front of me. ;P

Very well done. Nicely written, and I love your eye for detail. I'm sooo curious now about what Narcissa and Poppy know about Potter, and about the whole prophecy thing. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the great work! ^^

I very much like the spin you've put on this story. You've all of the characters the Peter Pan feel, but you've let them retain the basics of what made them who they were in cannon. I particularly like your depiction of Narcissa Malfoy. She is so warm while at the same time being as refined as she was in the books. The mother in Peter Pan was always one of my favorite characters. I hope you update this soon, and if there is a mailing list, I would like to be added to it. My email address is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex

Tooo cute!!! I sooo need chapter 4!!!

wow, awesome, looking forward to more

Can't wait for chapter 2!