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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5 Well, this IS going to be a story about Potter and Draco being in love. I think a little "discovery" about the joys of self-masturbation wouldn't be amiss. Children can and do learn to masturbate at a very young age. They know it produces good feelings even if they don't necessarily equate it to anything sexual or even another person. Your scene was very well handled (no pun intended) and thoroughly credible. Maybe Harry can do it with Draco watching next time. ;)
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
actually, I think you did very well with the *ehem* 'discovering'. It was, to me, very realistic but I'm wondering how old potter and draco are meant to be in your story?
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this and your doing a perfect job keeping the story. the only thing is i wish they were all a bit older at least like 15 thinking of them as 12 or 13 really makes me feel like a pedophile. great job keep up the great work
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!!!
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think the "discovering" scene was ok. Well, I'm not expecting fairy tales on this site, even when story base on Peter Pan xD I don't know, maybe it was intended but you use Harry name in 5 chapter and so far you avoided it. Anyway, I like it and wait for the new chapter!
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, I thought it was fine. It's so hard to have to write such young versions of people. He's had no one describe that sort of thing to him so he was confused.
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was giggling at Harry's first boner XD It was hilarious! And very well written. No, it didn't detract from the story at all and it made it clear (for the first time I should point out) that this isn't just about Draco's self-discovery but Harry's as well. Question, for you. Is Harry's name ever gonna be Harry? Or is he just gonna be Potter? Just curious ^^
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought the scene showed just how much Draco's appearance affected Harry...hes feeling things hes never felt before. It was wonderfully done as well. thanks for updating.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!!!
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
New chapter, at last! It turned very interesting and now dementors are there too. Can't wait for the next chpater, I hope you'll post it faster :)