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by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WTF....

Erhm, this was, erhm.... Not sure IF I liked it at all, but I like the way you wrote it.... ha ha, GOD!
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow. That was....unlike anything I've read before. Startling. Horrifying. Engaging. Powerful. Just...wow. What an idea!
person DHnotHD
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was fantastic!!!!!
So does Lucius look like Harry then? (I read something about Lucius in his "new body") Or will he look like his old self (not that he is old, since I always thought the Lucius was the best looking HP character)
I guess that will make it easier on Lucius and Draco if he did look like Harry but he could end up getting sent back to Azkaban for the murders Harry committed. If he looked like Lucius though, then Draco might get in trouble for performing dark magic.
So I guess my question is, who did he look like when he came back?
person Diane
schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was seriously twisted and I hade it all the way to the end before figuring out what Draco was up to. I mean, a couple things jumped out as being iffy, but I never put it all together. That was seriously impressive, especially since it surprised me. Hot damn. I really had no idea. Excellent job.
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of course without your hint of no happy ending, I would never have guessed that Draco wasn't a good guy in this, but the moment Kingsley brought up that Harry might be in the posession of a Dark Magic Artifact, I figured that this might have been Draco's plan. And yet, you surprised me anyways. I had not expected it to be Lucius, no matter how many times you brought up his name. I'm a bit sad that this couldn't be a story about Draco helping Harry's wounds heal, which wouldn't have worked well as he did kill Ginny and Lily (surprisingly), but this was interesting. I can't bring myself to dislike Draco completely, if only for the fact that he was aware that Harry had affection for him, probably because you captured my heart with that story Draco told. Wonderful story.
person Kia
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! It was obvious towards the middle that Draco was responsible for Harry's change, but the fact that he was trying to bring back Lucius was a total surprise; I thought he was simply trying to grab Harry for himself.
person evalhanne
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Scary and freaky . . . I like it! Feel sorry for Harry though, but I really do love Draco . . . and Lucius . . . brought back by his son's love and obsession.
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy smoke!
person Myra
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.. god. GODS. That was.. disturbing. Amazingly written.. heartwrenching .. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HARRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYY! T_T

Need I say more?
person DracaMalfoy
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Fantastic. This literally had me biting my nails.

"made Malfoy