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by Jetfire

schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cutest thing ever!!!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:) I loved it!! loved sirius.. and the smell.. :D great job!! would love to see more if your muse ever leads you back..
ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit
person Illyra
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. It
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, they're daddies now. So sweet. Great story!
person live2luv2live
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story ^__^ Before this i've only read HP/DM but this is really cute and i want to kno what happens next! Update soon ☺
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I knew I had read it before, you always remember a good fic and I guessed as much that it was on FF.net. As for them not allowing sex etc, [shush] I hope nobody points out that to them, as all of my fics are rather graphic in nature! ;)

Try not to get too disheartened on here regarding the lack of reviews. I have found that the readers on this site don't tend to review nearly half as much as they do on FF.net. Sometimes it can be quite annoying and when you ask them to review, you end up getting a load of grief from them; moaning that you should be writing for the sheer love of it, not to acquire reviews.

My advice is to go by the hits the story gets rather than the number of reviews to prompt you and motivate you. It is my opinion that the general readership pairings for this site are HP/DM, HP/SS, HP/GW, DM/HG. SB/RL aren't as popular here as they are when compared to FF.net but there are a few loyal followers of this 'ship.

Eagerly awaiting next chapter.
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll review seeing as no one else can be bothered. This is a really great story but I'm sure that I have read the beginning bit before, it seems so familiar. Have you published this on another fanfic site?

Anyway, great story and seriously hot in places! Look forward to next update.