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for A Chance at Happiness

by Vampirezdarkgurl

person poohbear74
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, I really liked the part about Tom running his fingers thought Dante's tuft of hair, At the time I was holding my Daughter and looked at her tuft of and laugh because i do that too.
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! harry is so protective...Its adorable! I can't wait for more of this story and the next one!!
person Diane
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that debate went splendidly. I can't believe Fudge said those things. And the article was well done as well. It sounded just like one of those gossip pieces. Harry's labor went well. I think I would have used more description, little tiny things like cleaning the child, cleaning Harry, an extra little snip and a healing clarm for the cord. It was still quite good. Oh, I was also a little surprised that no one questioned Voldemort's truth spell. If I were defending Fudge, I would have called that into question. Wizard that powerful? I wouldn't put it past him to use a non-verbal spell and say something else. I suppose the wand movement would be wrong though. Well, either way, I'd still question it. And I don't think they would have used a recording device when they could just use someone's memories. I love them putting it up for sale though. That's brilliant business right there. And no, I didn't expect that little change at the end, but I worry about it getting... cliche? But there's serious potential there as Dante grows and is courted. And don't put periods after titles like mister and doctor unless your abbreviate them to Mr., Dr. and the like. I can't wait to see Fudge's trial. That's going to be fun.
person Sabkay
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, i found your Story, and I do love it!
Could you please inform me when you post a new update?
Thx
Sabrina
person netty82
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying reading this fic.
and i am putting my vote for Fulfilling A Destiny
person Vicky
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
5 VOTES OF HUNGRY LIKE A WOLF. HEHE
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, stupid bills. Anyway, I once again vote for Harry/Fenrir.

Another great chapter. I love it when a cute little baby is born. Well done. Cheers!
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes the baby is born its funny my brother is naming his son Dante too. love this chapter and loved how tiger is Dante's mate. please update soon.
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Okay... tiger being a human threw me for a loop! Draco is pregnant?!?! I feel sorry for Siri! Thanks for letting me use the prophecy...but I don't think my story will be up for a while... I will let you know through! I vote for the charmed crossover of course!
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. They are so mind enrapturing. I can't wait for the next chapter. I would also like to vote for Story one: