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Ooooooh *munches on cookies*

I am kinda surprised that they are talking about this very calmly. Arent Severus and Lucius even mad that Lily used a potion to take James away from them. Now I do wonder how James will react when Harry calls him mum hehehehe

Update again soon

Another chapter...hooray!!
Great job.
Cant wait to read more.
I'm just dieing for you to get to the part about Lv/Hp.

It's quite good so far. Although I think there's not enough of emotion going between Lucius, Severus and Harry. To be told the truth I think Harry would rather prefer a little bit more of his freedom and doesn't want to tie himself to his two fathers quite yet. And that Harry's both fathers should be more desperate with Harry's aloofness. After all he is the son of their beloved mate. So wouldn't they want him desperately? It just doesn't feel real enough. Although I'm not saying it's bad. Because you write wonderfully. Thanks for the chapter. I hope I didn't gloom you with my review.

One question - why do Dursleys believe that Harry is going to pay them? You need to be a bit more careful with details otherwise it's not realistic.

So,Lily and James are never together then how did she get on Harry's birth record?
and not Malory and Snape?

The plot does thicken quite nicely.

Wow. And the plot thickens. Very nice. Soooooo.... Please update soon! n.n I really like how this is turning out. Very nice job.

It's starting to get mysterious. >> Me like-e! lol

This is really sounding interesting. I like independent!Harry, though I do hope he gets closer to his fathers. I also really hope Harry and Draco will be friends. And will Draco get a partner also? Or maybe two? I feel like the story is just a little bit predictable, but it's still good so far!

kickass story so far, your doing really well and i find it very interesting. Keep up the great work!

i love it