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for A Chance at Happiness

by Vampirezdarkgurl

schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes he should...it would make everything in harry's life easier but still pretty complicated so that you still have a good story...well any ways...i love this story and can't wait to see how you get tom and Harry together *GLOMPS*
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Should Sirius be alive? Yes
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You still did great. I think this story is realy going somewhere. I'm already falling in love with it. I think Sirius should be alive, maybe he was off looking for James?
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter...cant wait to read more.
person kunitsu
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was nice that Draco took it well. I am glad everything is going fine for Harry and it's one more chapter to the changes the kiss will do to Harry. Keep it up and I hope you get over your cold soon *hug*

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schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please write more. That was great. PLEASE..PLEASE..PLEASE!!!!
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If I was Draco I'd be royally miffed and not because I have a brother but 1) His father kept it from him and 2) Harry didn't want anything to do with him in school by not taking his hand in friendship and now he's expected to play nice? So yeah that's my view. I know you said that Voldemort is becoming more sane, but he's acting very, very calm. I'm not saying he'd be evil or mean to Harry but wouldn't he express more anger and disgust at even the mention of Dumbles after all the torment the old man has put him through? Don't get me wrong though I love how this story is progressing and I can't wait for them to find Harry's mum. *grin*
person anniea
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow please update sooon real soon like tomorrow soon and if not then oh well. honestly i like the feel of this story, it flows fantastically (i had a part of the mask of zorro in my head when the goblins told harry that blood never lies)and if you didn't notice please update soon *kisses*
person rainbow
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it
person Baby Dragon
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter