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Brilliant chapter. and i loved remus's entrance. I want a tiger of my own though. Pouts...

Ony thing i'd say is i dont think harry and draco would be talking about everything so openly in the corridors when theres ghosts n more importantly portraits that'll report the conversation to dumbles. Other than that, great.

I love this story! Normally I don't read Harry/Voldemort ones, but this one caught my eye. Please update again soon (and I would love to see more Draco/Sirius, and James/Lucius/Severus lemons please ^_^)

Good chapter, I liked the way you handled Dudley's punishment.

good chapter.

Wow, you are the first author I read, that doesn't lump the Dursleys together and just punish them all. Hmm... that is a refreshing look of it.^___^

Can we have some fluff and lovey lovey scene now? Please? *Begss with puppy dog eyes*

I LIKED WHAT YOU DID TO DUDLEY AND AS FOR THE TORTURE IT WAS GOOD.

i really like this story. i can't wait for dumble ro herm to be punish please up date soon.

Wow OK, I've spent most of the afternoon and night reading this because it got me hooked! I can't wait for another update, this story is excellent. The only piece of criticism I have is to work on your punctuation, everything else is fine it's just that you tend to leave out a lot of ',' (comma marks) and it interrupts the flow of a sentence. If you are unsure of where to place a comma in a sentence, I have two points of advice on that: 1. Get a beta reader to go over it and check it for you, not just the punctuation but everything while they're there. 2. If you're not a beta kind of person and you like to upload pretty much as soon as you finish writing, I'd suggest reading over your work and reading it how you would actually say everthing, and when you pause in a sentence, that's where to add the comma.

But on another note, I love the pairings in this! They are quite different to your average fic, especially for a creature fic. I mean Draco and Sirius? Not a pairing I would have thought of but it works!

So yeah, I can't wait for an update, please do so ASAP and I will love you forever
~gorgeousbowneyes

creative and different, he didnt dismember them or the other usual stuff. Good chapter.

I love it!! Yeah they got what they deserve!! Whta will harry's reaction be??