rate_review Reviews

I fully understand that situation about Beta's.. I don't care if you have one or not. Ignore those who say you should get one. I would love to see some Draco/Sirius and Lucius/James/Severus loving but only if you feel like writing it. After all if you have trouble writing it it slows down the work and makes it unfun to write.

Aw. The angry dom is angry. XD I love this story~ I can't wait to read more. <3

Hey now don't chastise me.. I'd be slower if I didn't post multiples!

Does Ginny give up yet? She is so fucking annoying. More please. This is really good so far.

Its so great to be back and find this fic is still going strong.
Wonderful job you've done and so addicting.
Cant wait to read what Lv will do, hopefully something naughty to Hp.
Perhaps get the bond going...wink.

This is such a lovely story. Keep up the work and sorry for not responding sooner.

I am in love with this fic! =^^= Please update as soon as you can! The suspense is killing me!

I cannot wait until you update this story. I hope Tom hurts Ginny for the potion. I do hope that you will do the one-shots for the other pairings.

This is a rather interesting story so far, I've really enjoyed reading it. There are a few places where the dialogue and the story don't flow perfectly but other than that I think you've done a really good job with the story (this is in response to your remark about people thinking you need a beta, because personally I think you're fine without one. If you want one, and that's totally up to you, rather than trying fanfiction[dot]net I'd look at Perfect Imagination but that's all I'm going to say as it isn't really my place to say anything). Anyway, moving on to the actual review and away from my ramblings. I love the way you've written Harry in this on the whole, he's a fantastic character. I also loved the way that although Harry is a submissive to Voldemort you've written it so that he doesn't roll over at Voldemort's first command unless he wants to. I think in many ways this is a more realistic portrayal of Harry's character. I also loved the way you wrote Draco. Although I must admit in some ways I am slightly uneasy about everyone's seemingly easy acceptance of first Harry finding out Severus and Lucius are two thirds of this biological parents and that Voldemort and Harry are mates. I know this is completely a subjective thing, but I thought Harry would have fought more about it... but then Harry has always wanted a family, so I guess in that respect the way you wrote his reaction was true to form. I realize that this may sound critical but I don't really mean it that way, I'm just trying to talk about the areas which I don't think are as great as the rest of your fic. That sounds just as bad, doesn't it? I don't want to offend you (and I apologize if I have) but I wanted to offer you my thoughts. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter, and I would just like to say that for a first fic this isn't bad. - Sofia

I'm very, very very interested in the Lucius/James/Severus pairing!!!