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for A Chance at Happiness

by Vampirezdarkgurl

schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now you need another Harry/Voldemort scene. Anyway, this is really good so far. Please update soon. This story rocks!!!!!!!!
person Patdmcracdc
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, don't destroy an amazing story by making James pregnant! It'd be so wrong, and would sadly demolish everything that's good about the story. We (we're 12 people who've been reading since chapter 1) do love the story, but it's so wrong to do that. You're a great writer, even though some mistakes in the grammar.
Also, when is the angst coming back?
Love,
patdmcracdc
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!! can't wait the actual story!!
person poohbear74
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please oh, please make Draco pregnant!!!!!!!

I can not wait to see James pregnant too!!!!!

Loved the chapter and I want to see more of them with Harry and Draco now that Harry's pregnant
person Diane
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wipes a little drool off her chin* Draco makes such a hot uke. Hot damn I'm glad you decided to post that while you're working out the problem with chapter 24. Can we starting singing "Ding Dong Dumbledick's dead"? I'm a little surprised Voldemort didn't torture him longer, but he did have a mate to get back to so it makes sense that he'd be a bit of a hurry. Great idea using Dumbledick's wand. Bet that's going to confuse everyone. And Harry in the shower, mmm..... delicious. Looking forward to the next one!
schedule May 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! a whole chappie of sirius/draco, love it!

is sirius going to become a magical creature as well? or stay as a wizard?
person Celeste
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Draco and Sirius action finally. ^___________^

I love how you make Draco still a pissy Malfoy although he is a submissive. Thanks for sharing your story.
person Vittani
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks i'll have a look for it. Love the chapter. Very hot.
person poohbear74
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!Draco and Sirius get some, yes !!!!!!

I can not wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the good work and I hope to see other stories by you soon!
person kunitsu
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a hot scene betweeen Draco and Sirius. I just do wonder now how Lucius will react now that his precious baby has been "defiles" by Sirius XDDDDD