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for A Chance at Happiness

by Vampirezdarkgurl

person kunitsu
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I still get the feeling that there is something or someone that will get in their way of happiness.
person Selera
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see the story continueing keep up the good work.
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You did pretty good on your threesome scene,
i wouldn't know it was your first time writing if you didn't tell

well i'll be waiting for your next chapter ^^
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So kick butt! yeah love this story. so well written. very good. love it.
person celeste
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the interaction between James Lucius and Severus.

James is so playful ^____^
person Selera
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well lets see.. there is still going to be the suspicions about things.. and of course the ministry has to be straightened out. Oh *giggles* And what of Ginny and her obsession for Harry.. she was scared but I don't see her just giving up.. then most people still don't know that Harry's mate is Voldie.... *Giggles* Keep up the good work.
person Vittani
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
R u kidding that was a brilliant threesome, loved it.
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. It's good to know a bit more about how Lucius, Severus, and James view things. I'd been wondering. You should have Harry go sleep in their bed one night (maybe when Voldemort has to be away somewhere), it'd make James feel SO much better. I still really want to know what's next for Harry though.
person kunitsu
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that threesome was just hot and James was so cute, making his mates catch him first
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is....
More!! I want some More!!!