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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch 28: I would like to see story # 4 beacuse a) I don't know any of the crossovers, and b) I'm a big FG/HP fan, lol! Love your story! XD
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September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wonderful story. I sat through about 1/3 of it per day for three days. It had my (normally very short) attention from the time I was able to sit and read until I went to bed!
I have every intention of checking out all of your stories!
I have every intention of checking out all of your stories!
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this fiction. Once I started reading it, I just had a hard time pausing in order to do anything else. *cough* work *cough* While I did and do the story, there were one or two things that troubled me. And that is the punishment of the Weasley twins and Percy.
THE TWINS never seemed to care for much outside of quiditch and practical jokes. They were fun loving guys that sometimes went out of their way to protect Harry from those that thought poorly of him. For example: In 2nd year, when everyone believed that Harry was the Heir of Slytherin, they made it a joke in order to make sure that Harry knew that he was not alone.) When dealing with the money issue... the answer lies with their actions at the end of Harry's 4th year. Orginally when Harry tried to give them his winnings from the tournament, they tried to not accept it but Harry would not take no for an answer. And then when they started up their shop, did they not make Harry a partner in the business? All of these actions happened even though they did not really take part in Harry's like outside of Quiditch, a few jokes, and some silent if not quite so silent support.
PERCY, on the other hand, was a person out for power. He just never really tried to use Harry to obtain it. He was a man with a mission... he wanted to take part in the government and therefore obtain power and pretiege that way. Even if he was a somewhat blind follower of those above him. *cough* Fudge *cough*
WHILE I can easily see the punishment of the 2 youngest Weasleys and possibly their parents (who deserved their punishment due to the actions they portrayed in this fiction) I just cannot see the twins nor Percy as deserving the punishment that they received. You hardly even mentioned them with the story as to portray their being guilty.
BUT other than their punishment, I have nothing to argue with. The story was truly one that I loved.
THE TWINS never seemed to care for much outside of quiditch and practical jokes. They were fun loving guys that sometimes went out of their way to protect Harry from those that thought poorly of him. For example: In 2nd year, when everyone believed that Harry was the Heir of Slytherin, they made it a joke in order to make sure that Harry knew that he was not alone.) When dealing with the money issue... the answer lies with their actions at the end of Harry's 4th year. Orginally when Harry tried to give them his winnings from the tournament, they tried to not accept it but Harry would not take no for an answer. And then when they started up their shop, did they not make Harry a partner in the business? All of these actions happened even though they did not really take part in Harry's like outside of Quiditch, a few jokes, and some silent if not quite so silent support.
PERCY, on the other hand, was a person out for power. He just never really tried to use Harry to obtain it. He was a man with a mission... he wanted to take part in the government and therefore obtain power and pretiege that way. Even if he was a somewhat blind follower of those above him. *cough* Fudge *cough*
WHILE I can easily see the punishment of the 2 youngest Weasleys and possibly their parents (who deserved their punishment due to the actions they portrayed in this fiction) I just cannot see the twins nor Percy as deserving the punishment that they received. You hardly even mentioned them with the story as to portray their being guilty.
BUT other than their punishment, I have nothing to argue with. The story was truly one that I loved.
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, I must say. One of the first Harry/Voldemort's I have read. I wish there were more with that particular pairing completed on here. The dynamics between the two of them interests me, especially when they're being linked romantically. Great work!
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha! their punishment was AWESOME!
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know a story is good when you read it more than once I just wish there were more Harry is lied to by Dumbldork and Harry makes own decisions good luck with future stories :<)
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story its one of my favorites of yours. do you think you could make a story about charlemaigne and dante cause i would love to see how they turn out. i'm just asking.
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!! I cannot believe somebody actually came up with a Harry/Voldemort that came out happy.
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December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I just got into the whole Harry/Voldemort kick so I've been looking for any fics I can find. lol. I remember reading four of your previous fics The Charmed and mummy Crossovers and happened to be re-Reaeding them(I love them!!) When i noticed you had a Harry/Voldemort **sqeeee** I really would like to see a sequel to this fic if at all possible? please? if you get an Idea? I'm beggging I know but I really would like to see Dante and Charlemaigne's courtship and if Harry and Voldemort have more kids and maybe a little oneshot on Remus telling Fenrir He's preggers? lol can just imagine the reactions. ^__^ I am really looking forward to you newest crosoover fic too. ^__^ Hope to see it up soon. Loved this fic
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, I'd like to just say I thoroughly enjoyed this fic! Seriously, it was great! I also really like your other stories as well, but um... well to be honest, I'm pretty crap when it comes to reviewing! Lol! I normally forget when I get to the end and wander off to do something else! Lol! Or get distracted by another story before getting round to giving reviews! Feel proud that I liked your story so much that I actually remembered to review! In fact, I had intended to review this once I finished it, when I got a couple of chapters in! Yay! Go me, I finally reviewed something!! (Not that I never have before... it is a rather rare occurrence though... Heh.)
Right, I also had something else, besides giving you my praises on the story! It's about a beta, feel free to ignore this part, just I figured I'd offer you my services, now I've never been a beta for anyone before, but I just thought I'd offer. I realise you had a bad experience with a beta before, which is also a reason I'm offering. For one I promise that I would never take someone else's idea and post it as my own, it's wrong, dishonest and to be completely truthful, make me feel ill thinking about it. I had someone do something similar to me a couple of years ago, only mine wasn't fanfiction, it was a script I had been intending on handing in as part of my work for my degree. It's shitty when it happens, and even shittier when you can do nothing about it! So trust me, I can imagine how you must have felt at the time. To be honest though, unless you found someone you trusted enough to go back through this and correct any mistakes you happened to have made and missed, (in which case, I'm happy you found someone to trust!) then I really don't see what you are worried about! You're grammar and spelling is really not that bad, the only mistakes I could spot were mistakes anyone could have made, and were probably typos that were overlooked before posting!
So, seriously, you have a really good story here, and any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes you may have made certainly did not detract from the story! I'm not really making a good case for myself to be your beta here am I? Lol! If not, then I truly do understand, and I would like you to know, that a) I'm British, so feel free to email me anyway if you feel unsure over a Britishism you wish to use, or any slang/geography queries and b) I have a degree in Creative Writing so any other questions you may have, then again, feel free to ask. I really do enjoy your fics and I apologise if this review either insults you in anyway (trust me, that was not my intention) or seems a bit rambling (I may have had one too many cups of coffee)!!
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Right, I also had something else, besides giving you my praises on the story! It's about a beta, feel free to ignore this part, just I figured I'd offer you my services, now I've never been a beta for anyone before, but I just thought I'd offer. I realise you had a bad experience with a beta before, which is also a reason I'm offering. For one I promise that I would never take someone else's idea and post it as my own, it's wrong, dishonest and to be completely truthful, make me feel ill thinking about it. I had someone do something similar to me a couple of years ago, only mine wasn't fanfiction, it was a script I had been intending on handing in as part of my work for my degree. It's shitty when it happens, and even shittier when you can do nothing about it! So trust me, I can imagine how you must have felt at the time. To be honest though, unless you found someone you trusted enough to go back through this and correct any mistakes you happened to have made and missed, (in which case, I'm happy you found someone to trust!) then I really don't see what you are worried about! You're grammar and spelling is really not that bad, the only mistakes I could spot were mistakes anyone could have made, and were probably typos that were overlooked before posting!
So, seriously, you have a really good story here, and any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes you may have made certainly did not detract from the story! I'm not really making a good case for myself to be your beta here am I? Lol! If not, then I truly do understand, and I would like you to know, that a) I'm British, so feel free to email me anyway if you feel unsure over a Britishism you wish to use, or any slang/geography queries and b) I have a degree in Creative Writing so any other questions you may have, then again, feel free to ask. I really do enjoy your fics and I apologise if this review either insults you in anyway (trust me, that was not my intention) or seems a bit rambling (I may have had one too many cups of coffee)!!
Ate
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