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for A Chance at Happiness

by Vampirezdarkgurl

schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOH! I KNOW! It's BELLA! Am I right? Only she would be that Dark Lord obsessed (plus hating Sirius that much, and the attitude with Draco). Is she using Polyjuice, or something else? Well, whoever it is, I think they'll be in a LOT of trouble soon. The painful, death-inducing kind. But, if it IS Bella, where the heck is Narcissa? Does she know what her sister is doing? How long before we get the answers to this puzzle? Also, if Harry's attacked, PLEASE don't seriously harm him or the baby. That'd be too tragic.

On another note, Voldemort and Harry are too cute. I nearly fell off the couch laughing at the idea of a game of big, bad Headmaster and innocent schoolboy between them. It's actually rather appropriate, given who they are. Seriously though, Voldemort as Headmaster? It's brilliant.

Thanks for a GREAT update, and I REALLY hope you update again very soon.
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Is that really Narcisa or Bella under glamour/Pollyjuice???
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! This rocks!! I can't believe nacrissa!!! That witch!!
person Bones
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your mind is twisted and demented. Seriously. Yay! Gots to love the twisted people. love the story.
person alma
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter like always!
person kunitsu
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What the hell was that, Narcissa wants Voldemort for himself. She must be crazy

Woah all that talk about them having sex was hot
person windbell
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have the feeling that She is either Narcissa Black or Bella trix Lestrange but for Narcissa Black, there is 80 percent for this to be her.
person Selera
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap... I think Bella is pretending to by Narcissa...
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Narcissa is a few nuggets short of an order and needs to be committed. I love what you have written so far and I am always looking forward to another great chapter. Hope you post again soon!!!!
schedule June 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i like this story cant wait for the update.
~Ruby~