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for Revenge

by TheSiner

person lizkrohn
schedule July 8, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Lucius should court Harry properly. Harry shouldn't give Lucius what he wants that easily!

person Tat5934
schedule February 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This one shot was amazing ! But it was so sad that Draco died... He loved Harry so much!
person delia cerrano
schedule January 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I cried real tears. Well done. Though I hated, really hated Draco dying, it worked out okay.
person The Lurker
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice one-shot. I kind of wish that you'd made it a litle longer with an epilogue of a glimpse of their everyday life after a year or so had passed, perhaps including flashbacks to earlier days.... Anyway, I still enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

The Lurker
person Kimi Lowe
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. You could expand it to include the birth of the baby. Just a suggestion.
person She-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a really nice story I liked the way you finished it too.
person Callisto
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
English is not my native language so I write my review in French.

Il est vraiment
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, really, why does this story not have more reviews?

This story was amazing. Your use of language made it seem graceful, and the omitting of sex was very pleasant as well.

It was very very sweet, and damn you- it gave me cavities!

This was amazing, and I'm planning on checking if you have any other posted stories and if so I'm going to read them too!
person spiceholmes
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, how everything started and at the same time ended..but I wish you would keep writing the story it's a wonderful one, and I wish to know more about it.
person xikum
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story - a Lot! I could see Lucius do exactly that, and though Harry is a bit more innocent than I see him being, still - using the old amnesia thing and memory recovery helped it over that hump, I would believe something like that. I liked the happy ending, along with recognition of them being likely to have to work on things, and Lucius and Harry both being true to their characters. Thank you very much for writing this fic.