rate_review Reviews

Wow. This was really really dark. I like how your switched POVs, and showed the psyche of both the rapist and the victim. I totally understood why Draco was starting to long for Harry. I don't think you romanticized the rape but rather showed a plausible progression for what someone would start to think and feel in that situation. And I felt this was actually pretty believable considering what we know about Harry's background. I really really "enjoyed" it. I say that with parenthesis because it was more disturbing than anything but I couldn't stop reading. You do have some spelling and grammar errors, and if you continue it, you should consider getting a beta because this is a good story and people are gonna probably recommend it so you want to make sure all your creativity and effort shine instead of any errors. I hope you do a sequel, please consider it.

I love your story I really don't like one shots but I love this one and I can't wait for the next one

I'm not sure that I agree with your thought that there seems to always be something missing from your stories... I really liked this! If something is missing then its no surprise to me that you couldn't find it because it doesn't seem to be something that is possible to identify...

great job! and if you're up for a sequel i'd love to read it... maybe try for something along the same lines with lots of points of view and really long and then also try for something that is simply short and pretty much a pwp that's set immediately after this ending, or several weeks after this where they have had to deal with being together with Harry's friends, or maybe several years later where they are just still enjoying eachother? i definitely think that there are a lot of options out there if you should decide on a sequel...

regardless... this was really good, with lots of meat, and lots of questions and answers and lots of input and, of course, a nice little amount of smutty-ness! thanx for posting!

LoverofallthingsPttR

That was effin brilliant! .... very well written .... you should do another to wrap it up more .... I don't usually read one shots, but this made me really glad that I did :-)

a sequel would be nice! Good story...nice twist with the whole harry is a veela thing! Good job!