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for The Bittersweet Taste of Victory

by Nerys

schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
blasted internet connections..damn, my gmail is not functioning now.
Oh, I wanted to ask- where is this Yoda fellow? He is weird to say the least and he creeps me out.
Aaaannnddd...did Voldie EVER use an anti-pregnancy pill/potion/spell/kick on Hermione? Not that I have noticed..lalala..What is Voldie's patronus?Let me guess...snickers..laughs..cries...do you WANT me to make a guess? Whuf- whuf..ROLF..
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, i so want to know how the hell hes so god damn horny all the time, but mind you he has had sufficent practice with me haha,
as you may well have come to know Tom is very very kinky, sometimes even i cant keep up with him, but hes under my thumb....most of the time, hes a little scary when he gets going, but truth be told, i kinda like it, no secrets shall pass my lips about my abilites to tame my lord, because then they could be used against him hehe and he is far more sexier when he is in control.

total hot than hot bedroom action with our Hermione and Tom, its left me feeling just a tad over boiling point and in need of some Riddle me this and that...and a little more after....*SHOUTS* 'Oh Tommmmm where are you?' *GRINS* 'Oh yes Tom,thats the right spot' haha update soon lv! i need more lol, and i love Liam Sloan aswell :P
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHEW! Awesome two chapters! Uh oh Tommy is not in a good mood now...I think I know how to cheer him up *grin*...And Voldy is MINE!!! ALL MINE!!! MUHAHAHAHAA!! yeah those skinny guys are usually really strong...and they have big...ummm you know whats LMAO! Good the Grangers escaped so now he can't use them against Hermione...*points and laughs at furious dark lord* I'm really going to pay for that *sweatdrop* glad your enjoying your cappy...and yes I think the smiling comes first then the screaming...then the smiling again...All Hail Darth Voldemort LMFAO!!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!! *topples out of chair....again* Damn I need to steal me a certain Dark Lord *evil grin* yeah I could probably take him, although he is realy tall and I'm a tiny lil Irish woman LOL! And it's about time you updated...I've been goin crazy over here waiting for some delicious Riddle smut bwaahahaha! Can't wait til next chappie!!!...poor Hermione seeing a book burned like that, SACRILEGE!! Oh and here's your cappy for the yummy cookies, silly me *shakes head* ...Give me the cappy maker NOW!!! uh oh...*turns around and sees impatient Dark Lord* EEEP!! *tries to make a break for it but gets incarceroused and carted off on voldemorts shoulder instead* Should I be screaming or smiling? O.O
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn...that has to suck...anyway...I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Hermione got in trouble 'cause she liked his younger appearance? Hmmm...interesting. Well, more soon please.
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whyyyy??Oh, whyyyyyy? Why is SHE with HIM over there, enjoying herself, and I haveto suffer down here? HUH?
Blaaaah...I am sooo in love with Voldemort. The way you portray him is just unbelievable! It;s COMPLETELY IN CHARACTER, even though Voldie does not have sex in JKR books ( I hope not..not with Bella, anyway), but ...were he to have sex, THIS is what it would have looked like. Does that make sence?

And OHHH, Yummy Magic..Sure as hell, Ron Weasley did not know how to do THAT ...ROLF
I am afraid I dropped my laptop again, after reading :
"Do you require my help to suck my cock as well?" ROLF ROLF..It's just unbelievable! Soooo, about the "supa"-magic. When Hermione had orgazm, the spell was lifted automatically? Bugger. I would LOVE to crawl around Voldie's feet for the rest of my life. Yeah....
It seemes that Hermione is the first one that actually stayed alive after Voldemort used that spell for the first time. I wonder, though, how many females were "burned" by desire? Yep, yep, That's our boy...cough..I mean our Lord. Poor Voldie- gray hair. No wonder, you know! Look what your Hermione is doing to that poor baby!
......Getting up from the ground after a round of Cruciatus...I meant to say, My Lord- "Look what our Lord's Hermione is doing to our Master!!!" looks for aproval desperately.

Maaan, is your Voldie eating a viagra or smth? I'd like to imagine a man who could still "perform" ,winks, after being questioned like that!
-Kiss me, Hermione.
-Is that your real face or transfigured?When did you transfigure it? What wand movement did you use? Why didn't I see it? Which potion did you use? Did you test it on house elves? On Harry Potter? On ssserpensssotia?
-Hold me tight, Hermione.
-What charm did you use? Did you feel any pain? Did it hurt? Where did it hurt? Can you do it again? Can I see it? Can I try it? Can we do it together? Is that Dark Magic? White? Gray? Pink? Whaat???
ROLF!!!
The shower scene- so sweeet,,,ohhhh...Poor Hermione- in love with no other than the most evil wizard alive. So wonderful. And gasp! Was Tommy submissive there for a minute? Naaahh..He is too smart- he will even manage to manipulate a toilet seat and get some pleasure/ experience/ knowledge in return. Such a sweetie!!!! LOL
As magnificent as always. I bow down to you, Nerys. I really do.
Now, after reading your chapter, I'll go delete the sex scene in Colors' next chapter. I am meant for drooling, not for writing sex scenes.
UPDATE!!!!
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I am getting old. I forget too much nowadays.
Forgot to ask one more thing..This story is rated ADULT + .Right?
Care to share with me what kind of story do you believe should be rated ADULT ++, if THAT story has only one +??
This is the hottest smutty fest for me! YAY! No need to check pornsites, just reread Bittersweet again!!! LOL

P.S - one more thing I forgot to add.
Voldie is paranoid, isn't he? Destroying an already destroyed book. By hey, he knows better, doesn't he? ROLF
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*laughs at comment* believe me i have my ways of keeping Tom in check lol.

he just needs a firm hand every now and then....he doesnt object either....

as for Draco....who wouldnt lol

great chapter darlin update again soon!
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! I guess you'll have to get several reviews from me for every chappy! :)
No smut, e? Well, It is VERY good without it as well ans I don't see either where to put smut scenes in this chapter. I forgot to ask smth on ff, but since now it's allowed to give only 1 review for each chappy, I'll ask here :) LOL
Is Hermione REALLY changing? I feel like she does. Like, when Voldemort comes in good mood, she thinks " maybe he finally killed Smith" and RETURNS TO HER BOOK, without thinking about the poor fellow. She has changed, right? It's like her involvment with Voldy is turning her- she's in love with him and maybe that's the reason for her NEW behavour. She does not think about killing him, like before. And with Hogwarts file- she is fascinated by him, she says she hates him, but in a good way. YAY!!!!
I am very, very pleased :)))
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"She never stood a chance, because, by Merlin, can I just drool all over this file right now?" LMAO!! I whole-heartedly agree...I would snog his sexy dark self too....And just let him try nicking my cappy-maker!!!! He may be a powerful wizard but I bet he doesn't know how to brawl the muggle way...like my crazy Irish self...muahahahaa!! That's right Voldy, bow down to the almighty owner of the cappy-maker!! Awww no smutty goodness?! =( Well I guess I can wait(or re-read the last chapter *grin*)...Your story is starting to mess with my dreams at night LOL!
Keep up the great work...Here take these cookies and hide them!