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for The Bittersweet Taste of Victory

by Nerys

person sjauthor
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27
Ohhhh, I think this story has an addictive charm on it...I'm neclecting my household, I've stopped eating and drinking, I can't stop reading it! Should I burn my computer? :)

This is so exciting! Can't wait to see what the Monks have to say to her!
person sjauthor
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 10-15
Well, apparently there is a limit to how many times you can review a story in one day! I couldn't review anymore, earlier. I should be able to now, since it is another day. I guess I should review a few more Chapters at a time.

In Chapter 11, I liked this line:
person sjauthor
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7.
What? What? What explosion? Ohhhhhh.....so exciting!
The sex scene was HOT.
The Monks, so Star-Wars-ish! But I liked Star Wars, so, great!
Have to stop, now, got to sleep sometimes. But I'm looking forward to reading the rest sometime!
person sjauthor
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 &9
Oh no! Nagini is dead, and he is mortal again!!! Ooohhhhh, how is he going to deal with this!
person sjauthor
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3, 4 and 5
Wow, that was a great surprise, how she switched bodies with Murdoch! And what rotten luck she had to get sick. Some timing too! :O
I do wonder why she didn't take the portkey...
person sjauthor
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6
Man, I'm glad I've discovered this story! It is full of surprises...Florence Nightingale, great name for a healer, by the way! Never expected it to be him, though! Poor girl.
And now my own question is answered too, why she didn't take the portkey.

I wonder, after that bit of Legilimency, if he now knows she has been at the Monastery?
I love how you have both Hermione and Voldemort so perfectly in character.
person sjauthor
schedule July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
By the way, it is perspiring profusely, not effusively (effusive=expressing feelings of gratitude/pleasure/approval)
person sjauthor
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first Chapter of this story. Great start, love the suspense! Kept me on the edge of my seat.
person sjauthor
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2:
Ohhh, Yay! Very well done! Crossover with StarWars? LOL!
I guess Voldemort lived with the Monks too, those years that he disappeared.
This is so exciting!
Loved, loved, loved the fact that it was Hermione in the store, but he didn't realize it...
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story....and I miss you Nerys....=(

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