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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank is all I have to say. Tok for ever to read since I had to come and go to work. But I wanted to thank you for posting all in one. I agree with your idea. Even thou its annoying to keep up with writing and etc it better that they finsh their stories. So thank you again.
Story review:Very interesting. I like the story line and the funny side comments. At first I thought it might have been moving to fast but then when I finshed reading it I thought it was great. Taht you had to so some skiping in the begining, from days to months. I like the thrill it had when Harry dissappered. xD It was also great because there was a story line and very little sex. Which I do like, its better then straight out pron. xD So great job and I will be reading your other stories! :D
~Ley
Story review:Very interesting. I like the story line and the funny side comments. At first I thought it might have been moving to fast but then when I finshed reading it I thought it was great. Taht you had to so some skiping in the begining, from days to months. I like the thrill it had when Harry dissappered. xD It was also great because there was a story line and very little sex. Which I do like, its better then straight out pron. xD So great job and I will be reading your other stories! :D
~Ley
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
was really cute
but nothing i saw really makes this an adult story
also you might need to go over this one last time to get rid of the errors or just get a beta
either way i liked it
but nothing i saw really makes this an adult story
also you might need to go over this one last time to get rid of the errors or just get a beta
either way i liked it
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that story was absolutely bloody brilliant. I wholeheartedly agree about you thoughts on incomplete stories. Isn't that the most annoying thing in fandom?! I actually have that as my mission statement on FF.net.
I love your A/U and you characterisation. I do have only 3 complaints about this fic.
1)The text changed to italics a 1/3 of the way in (annoying more than anything).
2)A number of minor spelling mistakes but it was a huge amount of text and therefore understandable some slipped by in the editing process.
3)Lack of detailed slash (sex) scenes. You created some very intense moments in which you could have gone into more detail. I understand that this maybe due to Harry's age (although in UK 16 is age of consent kind of; it's complicated).
But overall this was a fantastic use of three hours (my hubby kept interupting me). Brava
I love your A/U and you characterisation. I do have only 3 complaints about this fic.
1)The text changed to italics a 1/3 of the way in (annoying more than anything).
2)A number of minor spelling mistakes but it was a huge amount of text and therefore understandable some slipped by in the editing process.
3)Lack of detailed slash (sex) scenes. You created some very intense moments in which you could have gone into more detail. I understand that this maybe due to Harry's age (although in UK 16 is age of consent kind of; it's complicated).
But overall this was a fantastic use of three hours (my hubby kept interupting me). Brava
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love you i love you i love you i love you i love yoooou. that story was great. proper drama romantics. loved it.
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This really is a wonderful and long story, and I like the name of angel...thanks for it.