AFF Fiction Portal
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story, but then I have liked several of your stories. I am now on a quest to read all of them. Great Job!!!!!!!!
person minn yun
schedule September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey! i love Angel Black. i love this AU story. thank you for the very enjoyable story. knight-in-shining-armor!Draco's sooooo refreshing.
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally finished...

I really, really liked your story and the end and all :)
So...thank you!!!!!

Have a nice week,

Bye,
LIls

P.S.: And you also have a small problem with "now" and "know"...but nothing, a good beta couldn't solve ;)
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading the story and I really like it....BUT
please get a beta reader!
You have a really big problem when to use "the"...
so please, find someone who will fix it for you

Thanks for the story!!! *continues reading*

Bye,
LIls
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I should tell you that this story is very nice, cute!!
person imera
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the best AU story I have come over, especially one that happens to have many of the characters. I love the idea of a mean and cold Draco bastard, he was really funny. My favourite scene, hard to pick one actually; the first that I think about is when Harry dresses up as an angel, and the day after when he is over emotional.
There is a couple of things that really annoy me, smaller mistakes but they are the worst, but those are the things that can easily be overseen.
If you want you can send the text file to me and I'll beta it as good as I can, wouldn't mind since I love this story. In case you want then you can send it to imera_kasam@yahoo.co.uk I hope you write something else soon :D

person Vibora
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome story! ^_^
i loved it! =D
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this!
person anniea
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it took me THREE HOURS to read this story and i have to say that it was amazing. although i think that it would have been fine for you to let yourself go during the sexual scenes. although there are kids out there who sneak in and read the stories for the most part were are all adults here. then again i might have your reasons all wrong. all i'm saying is that while on this website it's okay to let go of your sexual feelings. keep up the great work! *kisses*
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it!