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for Breathe

by Nevermind113

person Laurakkc
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In response to your note at the end: Actually, it was quite lovely. I don't know if you re-wrote or tweaked it a bit, but what I just read was very nice indeed. Thank you.

--laura
person cissy
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
'hope it wasn't TOO bad'?
Are you KIDDING me?
This was GORGEOUS!
person Utopia
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!

I presume Draco's just past the six-weeks-old mark and the healers have given Narcissa the go-ahead for naughty things? lol.

11/10
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought your story was sweet. I do love Lucius/Narcissa stories, but there is a painfully short supply of them. Keep going, I enjoyed it.
person pittwitch
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Promising ... did you intend the run ons in the beginning? They made Lucius' thoughts seem to jumble together, tumbling into each other, not completely separate.

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