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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I like the way you weave the two phases of Harry's relationship with Draco together. I am never quite sure which one it is and have to think carefully. The hidden rooms quite startled me. Looking forward to the next episodes.
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I soooo need chapter 9!!!!
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
actually, I really like how you write, direct and to the point, You need to change seventh birthday in the first chapter to seventeenth birthday. other that that little blooper, I'm on to read more.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never do this, but this is really quite good, and I just want to help smooth out the rough spots. I would change the sentence about H and D being friends now to read -.....friendship in spite of hating each other during their school years. It just makes more sense that way. Anytime you reader has to back track and go "huhhh?" is a bad thing, you loose momentum.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story and your writing style. I hope that you won't let any negative reviews keep you from cotinuing. I can't wait to see how this story pans out.
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh...an update...I really don't realize...ah~~~~
Anyway...there seems to be some delicate moments, and Harry is starting to change...that's good! Just wondering when will this end...
Anyway...there seems to be some delicate moments, and Harry is starting to change...that's good! Just wondering when will this end...
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes cant wait so happy your back !
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 8! Now that's something! He could cheat and Draco would stay. Prolly kick his arse but he'd stay.
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Why does the nightmare reappear again? Does that relate to the spell? I am quite worried...
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 7! Fantastic chapter!!!