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for Nephilim\'s Power

by Diviniti

person karas9
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome, please continue, and tonks sex is always amazing
person Zerim868
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Defentily looking interesting so far. I am looking forward to seeing more,and especially hoping you do involve ginny.
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story.

2nd chapter answered many questions. So, he won't get knowledge from his women; was a good idea but now I am waiting to see what YOU have in store.

You mentioned something like 20% of power, but it wasn't clear. So, how mcuh power he gets say 1) from BOUND women 2) From ONE-NIGHT stands?

You also din't mention how Harry would bind these women. He just raped Hermione but what is stopping her from telling someone. Is it just because she liked it? or Harry sort of put some pressure on her?

I can understand that Harry can get power after shagging and can be equal to (or more than) Dumble and Voldy. But, how will he match their knowledge (repeating my self again)?

Oh and forgot to mention last time, its good to hear it won't be JUST sex story. I like those but if it's tied into a proper theme, it's even more enjoyable

Waiting for next chapter.
person Basal
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I certainly hope you will add Ginny and Bellatrix in to the Harem =)
Nice first chapter byy the way.
person Nymphe
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start! Please, no Ginny, she is useless (unless she betrays Harry somehow and gets killed, then that would be facsinating). He needs girls who can help him. I say go against the herd and use Rosemerta instead of the Black sisters. Narcissa and Bellatrix have been done to death, IMO.
person Carlin
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice work and I agree with you on some of the things you have been saying in your notes, if your still after names to add to his little sex list then how about some of his teachers I'm not saying Minerva but there has to be a few younger female members on the staff he could fuck... including a new DADA teacher coming up after all.
person Carlin
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice work on this so far and I have to say I'm looking forward to reading more of it.

As to other girls... well I would say Susan Bones and Lavender Brown come to mind as douse Luna and Rosmerta the owner of the three brooms, thats all that comes to mind, anyway do keep psoting this fic as I have seen to many abanded because of lake of reviews, write for your own enjoyment I always say.
person ecorate
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice keep it up
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that is a new twist... Interesting indeed, I look forward to reading some more!
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story so far keep up the good work, as for suggestions how about something with the Patil twins.