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Hmm, interesting storyline. I'd definately like to see where this goes. The sex is def a bonus! :)

You mentioned it yourself, smut. I was hoping for something in this chapter. Ah well.

oh my and Fleur's monther? now what would Harry do? I am assuming that they will just do stuff and not bind?

It was your normal length chapter but you said you'll update soon. Oh and more smut please. At least 1 scene per chapter (more than a paragraph).

Quite demanding readers eh?

Oh and more One shots like 'Quidditch Practice' please.

Thank you for being reasonable. I don't understand people having Harry want to fuck McGonnagol, nor redeem draco, nor add slash, either.

I hope he stumbles across Gabrielle at the Manor first. If Hogwarts is out, Beauxbatons should be too. She still needs to "thank" Harry for rescuing her, and a teenaged Veela would be quite fun to get a thank you from ;)

I like it I'm looking forward to more. I was kinda not liking the abuse harry was showing, but after the talk he had with tonks I feel a little better about it. The only thing that I really didn't like was betraying Hermione as a bad person, I know it is part of the story, I'm just a huge Hermione fan and I want her to be the hot and sexy one that harry loves!... anyhooo, you can forget about that little rant, I like it and am going to check back later for more.

Sasha

You should add Prof. Sinistra to Harry's collection.

I like dark Harry stories. Tonks is the perfect first for Harry. This first chapter is a very good start. the dream sequence is way cook. Your kunfu is strong. Now go, Go, GO. We need more dark Harry. Shoo, get to writing. Oh, just in case I forgot to tell you I LIKE THE STORY!

speaking of twins, what about the patil twins? no harem is complete without those sexy ass twins(the patils)

-The Don

P.S. a slythin has to be in it too. probably Daphane Greengrass or Tracy Davis(sp?) or somethin of the sort. maybe even pansy if you made her hot and not Malfoys sex slave

Amazing. The way you changed the raping Harry to caring one was simply amazing. I din't say about that before because as they say about fics "Don't like it? Don't read it." and I wanted to read it. But, that was great change.

Now, the only reason I mentioned Minevera was in case you decided that bonding also gets him knowledge of the bonded witch along with power. You decided not to, so it won't make any sense to have her there.

So, he can get power from Muggle women too?

About power, so the girls will KEEP THEIR power? or they become LESS powerful and Harry gets more?

You said he gets 20% of power if he doesn't bind them. What is normal power he gets if he does? Lets say, Hermione has 100 (units) power. If he binds her, how much will he get?

Just curious

Other than being submissive and think of him as his lord (and get power ofcourse), what are the advantages/effects are of a bound woman?

You answered almost all of my questions EXCEPT how will he get knowledge to fight Dumbledore and Voldemort? Can you please clear that? or is it a surprise?

I have this weird idea. How about making Hogwarts TOTALLY sentient and then bind HER to Harry? I am not sure how this looks but just throwing the idea out there. It'll give Harry more leverage in war. And I am assuming that power he gets from bound women is relative depending on how powerful the woman is. This way, he'll get WAY more power.

I think FREQUENT updates RATHER THAN LONGER chapters is preferred. Waiting for a week doesn't sound good.

Eagerly looking forward to next FREQUENT chapters.

Nice work once again, and I agree with everything you have said so far, keep it up and I look forward to Fleur being added to his little group... maybe even her mother and sister being added as well.

Good story so far and as for McGonagall, please don't include her in Harry's harem. Thats just nasty.