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for Cruel and Unusual Punishment

by AlexisRose

schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That little ending was heartbreaking. But I think Draco needed that injection to put things into perspective.

And Harry's an asshole.

PS: read some of these other reviews and people are idiots. The story is a funny, silly piece that's meant to be light not some deep, dark, plot-driven, character-introspective. Not that you're not capable, I'm sure you are if set your mind but I think you've written a sweet, light, story with semi-cannonish characters. It's creative with witty and funny bater/dialogue. Keep doing it and keep the story going.
person the norwegian girl
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this fic is great! I love reading it, and the song, poems (whatever) are brilliant ! I cant wait for an update ! =D
person risotto
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, don't tell me you aren't going to finish this...
person ametomoe
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is such a funny story, i was cracking up the whole time! please give us more soon, i can't wait!
person huggers21
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I miss reading the story. When are you going to update? :[

Please? Please?...... Please?
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more more more....

poor hermione...i hope draco makes it all up to her soon....and well just more please....
person Tori_In_Wonderland
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!
person luvhp
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry to hear about your compuetr crashing, that totally sucks. It's like a virus run rampant around here, you're the third author to have that or something similar happen to them. Okay,I am SO backing up my story! :)

This was a great chapter. I can't believe Harry said those things to her, guys are so stupid. (sorry guys)
So, Hermione snogged Loony Lovegood, LOL!!! I'm pretty sure the Ravenclaws will no longer 'stereotype' her as a plain jane bookworm ;)
And how sweet is Draco for not taking advantage of her, especially since she damn near begged him to take her.
That only makes it better when they do finally sleep together.
Good luck working on the rest of this, I'll def be here waiting for the next chapter :)
Funny Poem for Harry!
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love his poem for harry so funny!
person kazfeist
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, you did a great job reconstructing a lost work! I really feel sorry for both of them. You've done a good job of having Hermione doubt herself, and having Draco doubt HIMself, too! Now, get them back together, where they belong. :D