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for Cruel and Unusual Punishment

by AlexisRose

person mhaj78
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In addition, I just read the other reviews--and I say screw that. You can make Draco be whomever you want him to be--they don't have to have a "relationship" before he, a horny 17 year old, asks her for sex! I don't think the story is "dumb" at all...um, it's not supposed to be realistic...not only is it based on a book about WIZARDS but it's fanfiction, creating our own reality/future of characters in a fiction book. You just write whatever you want--if people don't like it, they don't have to read it...while people like me will continue to read and enjoy!!
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful chapter and the poetry was wonderful! I love your portrayal of Draco's indecision about his feelings for her. I also loved the part about the school wanting them to shag to make smarter babies.
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I was cracking up at this chapter! I can't wait to hear more of Draco's "songs", Blaise, ha! That should be good! I was so happy to see an update! Great work!
person sdank
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is really funny! Good job! I really like where you started the story.... it allows me to deside how they came to be on civil terms and avoids the awkward quick fluffy friendship thing... if that makes any sense =) but I can't wait for a new chapter... love your work.
person huggers21
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is so funny. :] A way to relieve all the tension going onto this planet.
Bravo. :]

Its simply cute and funny.

And to those who doesn't appreciate it. Just don't say anything please? :]
As for me, I love it so carry on. Cause Until someone likes it, it worth it. :]
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! That was too funny. I can't wait for the next update!
person wudelfin
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the was funny!!
person bodanger
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i have to say i really like where this is going, i really thought she was sirius. lol. anyways, so i like your stle of writing as well, i hope you update soon and have a good night
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh very intriguing, i thought it was really original, and i also thought it was a one-shot but now i know otherwise i am waiting eagerly for the next part! Loved it
Fiaxxx
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh too funny!! Love it