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for Cruel and Unusual Punishment

by AlexisRose

person iluv2dance
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAY!! Awesome! Brilliant chapter! Hahahaha! So good! Can't wait for more!
person Panther Eyes
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
everybody knows their 1st time was never good n no laughing at all. cant wait 2 see how much this truth or dare game will n 2 see what valentines draco made up.
person luvhp
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So quick with the updates, only to leave us hanging...hurry back soon, wanna see how this date ends!
person mhaj78
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no no no!!!!! I was so excited to see this chap and then you leave me hanging like this! :) I do, however, have the HUGEST grin on my face. What a great idea for their date!! I can't WAIT to read the next one...yay!!!
person janl
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are such a clever writer! Kudos!
person luvhp
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, 1 down, 3 to go.
And I am looking forward to their date as well!!!
Can't wait to see what Draco has planned.
Oh, and Pansy's poem, TFF!!!! Hahaha
person ichiruki
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I don't remember if I've reviewed or not, but this is so cute and the poems are hilarious, though I don't think Draco's going to have an easy time if Pansy's wrath is that notorious, or maybe (fingers crossed) she won't retaliate.
person Panther Eyes
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is draco asking 2 be kill? cuz that what will happen if he keeps acting like a jackass. hermione if u need 2 strink his dick.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually liked the poetry! it was hilarious, I would of loved to see him actually do that and see Milicant's reaction lol xx Oh well better get on with the next chapter. Excellent work BTW!!!
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just read the other chapter's, it has left me a bit confused. You mentioned that he was a virgin but left subtle hints that he has bedded other women, I'm not thick I know there is a lot more to do than full blown sex but I am just wondering if he is a virgin in this story? cause how I read it was that he was having full blown sex. Anyway apart from that I'm loving it Oh and don't take that as a flame please, take it as me being confused lol xx