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for Dinaer

by erin

person Vidalark
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! Well written chapter.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good i loved it
person anniea
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i knew there was a reason why i wanted to wait a couple of days to read this story. boy i am glad that i did because those last few chapters were amazing update soon *kisses*
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot. I like it when writers include two lemons in one scene. It appeals to my greedy nature! LOL.

I love where this story is going, I do hope that you have lots more plot to come etc.
person GML
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! *shivers* Now, THAT'S how I like to start my morning! *beams* I completely know what you mean. Slytherins... *sigh* This was utterly devine, my dear. As usual. Definately the best chap so far. *applaudes* More Please! ASAP! ASAP ASAP ASAP!
person Vittani
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well that was one of the best written sex scenes i've ever read. Just the right amount of entimentality and arousal. I'd help you with your paper but since i dont know the subject you might be better off with someone else, i have very limited knowledge. lol.

Anyway, update when you can.
person Ecks
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I usually dont like it when it is in first person perspective but you did a great job!
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! This is one of the stories I check when I log on. I can see Seamus, Dean, (possible Ron for a while, because of Draco) mad at Harry. I see Hermione doing lots of research and finally siding with Harry and Nevielle supportive of Harry even if he is wary of Draco. As for the other girls I can soo see them cooing over how cute Harry and Draco are together and shamelessly flirting with them. Well I look forward to more and I hope you do well on your paper, Im no help there since I live in the United States too, in the midwest.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so frickin sexy!
person jaimie
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh i'm sorry! my email is lady_jaimie@yahoo.com

i can't wait to read about Harry and Draco's first night together! ^_^