AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Dinaer

by erin

schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I was wondering if when you update this story if you would email me and let me know or tell me a way to keep track of this story. Thanks.
schedule January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update again....? I hope so this is one of my FAVORITE stories EVER. Best of wishes and Happy New Year.
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this!!! Please tell me you've not abandoned it???
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It has a great plot and I absolutely LOVE Harry/Draco fics. I hope you continue it soon. Please!!!
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've read a lot of fanfiction, but i think this is by far one of the best. It's so well written and quite emotional. Please continue writing, it's such an amazing story. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
(Btw, thanks for writing this as a Harry/Draco fic, they're such a cute couple XD)
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome creaturefic to keep an eye out for.

I can't wait to see more. Here's hoping for Rons change of heart!
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love it!!!!!!!! Please update!! =)
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i've never read a fic where Harry was forced to change houses. i want to know what happens! and whats up with Ron? tell me! or better yet, update soon! ♥ you!
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Solid writing. Its a compelling story that, even when not a terrific fan of slash, I still read it. It didn't come off as sounding amateur at all, which is a welcome relief from most fanfic. I don't wan this to be completely a rave, since the button says "review", so. A few thoughts. Albus reacting to harry's threat (in chapter 1) to kill the Dursleys would probably not be met with a "they had it a long time coming". That just seems out of character, and throught the stoy it seemed like albus's character was fairly IC. Also, a dinaer has dark connotations and most people outside pure blood families fear them and the lies about them, so harry boarding the knight bus without any questions would be strange. In the books, Stanly Turnpike (i think thats his name, anyway, the guy on the knight bus) was dumb and ignorant, so seeing a dinaer would probably cause him to "flip a bitch". You wrote "after a short conversation" (with the operators i assumed) harry and albus sit down, but that wouldnt really explain away the fact that harry has giant black wings on his back.
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon please!!

i really like it