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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Amazing so far. Can't wait for more.
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3! Poor Draco!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I have to say that I can tell that this will be a good read
You have no idea how much I want to make the best damn review I can, but I'm kind of making this on my phone...
But I PROMISE to write a worthy review when I find the time at my computer
But know that the plot is amazing, it's awsome that Sirius is alive and Draco is fucking addorible (when tortured)
So keep up the great work and please update as soon as you can!
Oh and before I forget I'd LOVE to get an email for when you update, my email is freefortennis2004 @ yahoo . Com
You have no idea how much I want to make the best damn review I can, but I'm kind of making this on my phone...
But I PROMISE to write a worthy review when I find the time at my computer
But know that the plot is amazing, it's awsome that Sirius is alive and Draco is fucking addorible (when tortured)
So keep up the great work and please update as soon as you can!
Oh and before I forget I'd LOVE to get an email for when you update, my email is freefortennis2004 @ yahoo . Com
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco...all that and what does he get...tortured. I hope Snape helps him soon!! I also liked the whole conversation Sirius and Harry had...hahaha...Sirius is in denial! I like the way you are writing this...its a good contrast between the dark and the light...the laughs and playfulness between the cruel and nasty. Very good! Keep updating!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story has lots of possibilities, Please continue it?
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful update! I simply adore Sirius and Remus together so that whole scene with Harry and him was very cute...poor boys that would suck to be torn apart for all those years. And as for Draco...well I just hope he won't be stuck in the Manor for to long. One can only take so much. I like what you said about Him having just as much emotional rage as the Gryffindor's but just doesn't express it - I completely agree and it's nice to hear that you'll be working with that (I always thought Draco was a complex character).
Also I just have to say that I love Snape, that poor man has had the worst life and now he has to sit around and listen to Draco getting tortured...gah that would be horrible! Anyways great chapter and I can't wait for the next part!
Also I just have to say that I love Snape, that poor man has had the worst life and now he has to sit around and listen to Draco getting tortured...gah that would be horrible! Anyways great chapter and I can't wait for the next part!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, so they did get catch him huh. Dammit Draco..I hope he stays strong. poor thing...I feel bad for Sirius too....is anyone gonna get laid or be temporarily happy in this story? LOL. No, seriously, great chapter. I hope Snape figures out a way to help Draco get out of there.
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh more!!!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for emailing me.
I know what you mean about ff reviews, my story was the same. I think i got three reviews in eight chapters or something. and i think here i was pretty close to a hundred if not over by that time. this is the best site for feedback but ff is the best site for more people finding your story but they just put it on alert and leave it at that. I liked the Sirius Harry interaction and Harry playing matchmaker, that was really well written. Only thing was i'd think Sirius would have mentioned how he mistakenly thought Remus was the spy and that was why they never told him of the exchange in secret keepers. Much as i love Sirius, i think that he'd be a little more self deprcating knowing both he and james made the decision that led to their deaths.
Sorry i had to get that in cos Lupin is so my favorite character. I loved the little insight into Snapes thought. I hope he has to blow his cover cos he's another favorite of mine and i can honestly say i knew he was a good guy from the very first book. The only thing then of course would be that the orders blind to Voldies attacks, and another spy wouldnt get a chance to do any good as Voldie would be on the look out for it.
Wow, long review, either way i so love this story. You write Draco's mental pain so well. And every character is perfect. I couldnt say a single one of them were even slightly OC.
Cant wait for the next update.
Vitt
I know what you mean about ff reviews, my story was the same. I think i got three reviews in eight chapters or something. and i think here i was pretty close to a hundred if not over by that time. this is the best site for feedback but ff is the best site for more people finding your story but they just put it on alert and leave it at that. I liked the Sirius Harry interaction and Harry playing matchmaker, that was really well written. Only thing was i'd think Sirius would have mentioned how he mistakenly thought Remus was the spy and that was why they never told him of the exchange in secret keepers. Much as i love Sirius, i think that he'd be a little more self deprcating knowing both he and james made the decision that led to their deaths.
Sorry i had to get that in cos Lupin is so my favorite character. I loved the little insight into Snapes thought. I hope he has to blow his cover cos he's another favorite of mine and i can honestly say i knew he was a good guy from the very first book. The only thing then of course would be that the orders blind to Voldies attacks, and another spy wouldnt get a chance to do any good as Voldie would be on the look out for it.
Wow, long review, either way i so love this story. You write Draco's mental pain so well. And every character is perfect. I couldnt say a single one of them were even slightly OC.
Cant wait for the next update.
Vitt
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January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it can't wait for the update