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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5! He knew as soon as he said Malfoy they'd forget all about the rescue. Dumbledore knows though. You can tell.
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very awesome story. I look forward to the next chapter. :)
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Interesting!
Please update chapter 5 soon. ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 5 soon. ^_^
Jan
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol isnt fun to chat with someone else who has the same level of satisfaction as you. You actually get to gloat to somebody that yes you figured it out. He he. The lack of Remus in the books is one reason for why i become so ecstatic over him being alive and having a role in a fanfic. And if its an important role even better.
I think you had snapes character dead on! Thats one thing i struggle with when writing him. He's one of the best and making him believable in your story sure does give you a lot of experience on writing complex characters. You certainly had the right level of 'i may be a git but im not evil! stuff going on. N i loved the bit with Sirius, he would so act like that. Lol, n i like how you've got Harry's noticing of guys in early. Usually its just 'oh wow is that gorgeus blond hair, merlin malfoy grew up to be a looker i think i fancy him.'
Lot better this way. lol. Cant wait for the next chapter, i want to know what happens when everyone realises its Malfoy they're rescuing.
I think you had snapes character dead on! Thats one thing i struggle with when writing him. He's one of the best and making him believable in your story sure does give you a lot of experience on writing complex characters. You certainly had the right level of 'i may be a git but im not evil! stuff going on. N i loved the bit with Sirius, he would so act like that. Lol, n i like how you've got Harry's noticing of guys in early. Usually its just 'oh wow is that gorgeus blond hair, merlin malfoy grew up to be a looker i think i fancy him.'
Lot better this way. lol. Cant wait for the next chapter, i want to know what happens when everyone realises its Malfoy they're rescuing.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol. I know full well about arguements over Snapes character. I kept telling them that he did it on dumbledores orders but they insisted that he was evil, blah blah blah. I had quite a smirk on my face when i read the seventh book but i somehow managed to refrain from getting up and chanting i told you so while doing a little happy dance.
he he. That was fun. I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Snapes thoughts on how to get them all to go along with the rescue were brilliant by the way, typical slytherin. N Draco's insane laughter at the end. Very fitting.
Very happy that the Remus n sirius' relationship will be further explored. I so love it when Remus has a part. That was one thing tht annoyed me about the fifth book, sirius was so important and remus was just shunted to the side unil she could use him to make Harry seem even more benevolent and wise (for his age) in the seventh. Never mind that it was so far at the end of the character xtreme as to be totally out of character...anyway enough ranting.
Long reviews, ranting on random subjects and gushing in my reviews all mean that this is most likely the best thing i m reading at the moment. With one particular story im sure the author thought i was either drugged up or slightly off balance. anyway pointless rambling asside, good chapter and i cant wait for the next one!
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Vittani
he he. That was fun. I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. Snapes thoughts on how to get them all to go along with the rescue were brilliant by the way, typical slytherin. N Draco's insane laughter at the end. Very fitting.
Very happy that the Remus n sirius' relationship will be further explored. I so love it when Remus has a part. That was one thing tht annoyed me about the fifth book, sirius was so important and remus was just shunted to the side unil she could use him to make Harry seem even more benevolent and wise (for his age) in the seventh. Never mind that it was so far at the end of the character xtreme as to be totally out of character...anyway enough ranting.
Long reviews, ranting on random subjects and gushing in my reviews all mean that this is most likely the best thing i m reading at the moment. With one particular story im sure the author thought i was either drugged up or slightly off balance. anyway pointless rambling asside, good chapter and i cant wait for the next one!
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Vittani
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 4!!
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
draco and i have ADD and loving it!
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I hope Severus can save Draco in time, because he is going to lose his sanity if he will not get out of there soon!
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You have REALLY great writing skills. *applauds* That last scene with Draco in ch. 3... wow. Intense and so realistic. I really love this story.
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