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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! update! (btw, my email's renascentia8@yahoo.ca. lol, now i can get my harry potter slash fix straight from the source!)
anyways, so many things that i want to say! first of all, i feel so bad for draco right now, and scared, and a tad (just a tad!) excited, because face it, anything to do with draco and bondage equals hotness. i have a bad feeling though that he has no idea what shit he has gotten himself into. i mean, manipulating the dark lord is like playing with fiendfyre. result: death or permanent scarring, and not the physical kind. and threatening foreplay is all fine and dandy, but i think i'd throw up if draco ends up falling for voldemort (or develop some sort of stockholm syndrome) *shudders* gah, love and voldemort just don't mix... unless you're bellatrix (or as another author had coined, bella the bitch), in which case u're just messed (and for all purposes in this story, dead).
voldie is seriously loosing touch with sanity though, if the way he snapped at draco in this chapter is any indication. i mean, seriously, power-tripping much? it was entertaining, if slightly distubing, and the way i can just imagine him hissing 'but you do bleed so prettily' is just creepy! (in a good way?) i wonder how draco's going to keep him interested without getting him TOO interested (i mean, everything so far indicates that he won't survive the actual rape)
oops, interruption. (i love my friends, really, but they don't understand a fangirl's obsession) i'll have to continue this review later!
anyways, so many things that i want to say! first of all, i feel so bad for draco right now, and scared, and a tad (just a tad!) excited, because face it, anything to do with draco and bondage equals hotness. i have a bad feeling though that he has no idea what shit he has gotten himself into. i mean, manipulating the dark lord is like playing with fiendfyre. result: death or permanent scarring, and not the physical kind. and threatening foreplay is all fine and dandy, but i think i'd throw up if draco ends up falling for voldemort (or develop some sort of stockholm syndrome) *shudders* gah, love and voldemort just don't mix... unless you're bellatrix (or as another author had coined, bella the bitch), in which case u're just messed (and for all purposes in this story, dead).
voldie is seriously loosing touch with sanity though, if the way he snapped at draco in this chapter is any indication. i mean, seriously, power-tripping much? it was entertaining, if slightly distubing, and the way i can just imagine him hissing 'but you do bleed so prettily' is just creepy! (in a good way?) i wonder how draco's going to keep him interested without getting him TOO interested (i mean, everything so far indicates that he won't survive the actual rape)
oops, interruption. (i love my friends, really, but they don't understand a fangirl's obsession) i'll have to continue this review later!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh please please keep this going - it is really great! the characterisation you use is incredibly well balanced and unique - you have taken characters, and whilst keeping them canon have made them your own and they move beautifully.
keep it up!
(and yes i know that sounded floury - i am an english literature student - what do you expect!!)
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keep it up!
(and yes i know that sounded floury - i am an english literature student - what do you expect!!)
x x x evel
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW. I loved it. Jeez creep factor is one thing, ew ew ew. Poor Sev. I love it when he wears glamours though, that is such a good twist to this. I feel sorry for him tho was dumbles asking him to drop the glamour? Ew ew ew, Sevs gonna have to attract voldie? Now thats wrong, so totally wrong. And i seem to be doing an impression of an american surfer. Oh well i usually do stuff like that when i like a story i get all hyper and just ramble on and one about really stupid things. Gods i cant wait for the next chapter of this, i really want to know what happens next. Oh are you planning to put Sev with anybody, i think he really deserves someone, the poor boys been through way too much hasnt he?
I'm gonna say this now, never ever worry about your characterisation. I've never read anything so in character yet completely oc cos its au. If that made any sense at all. I think this is brilliant. I really wanna know whats gonna happen next please please please please please please update soon. Sorry its a short review but i'm reading this quick while on a break. Oh i've got a new fic called mysteria on my ff account if you want to check it out, i'd love your opinion. bye.
I'm gonna say this now, never ever worry about your characterisation. I've never read anything so in character yet completely oc cos its au. If that made any sense at all. I think this is brilliant. I really wanna know whats gonna happen next please please please please please please update soon. Sorry its a short review but i'm reading this quick while on a break. Oh i've got a new fic called mysteria on my ff account if you want to check it out, i'd love your opinion. bye.
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 9!!!
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That slimy piece of crap touching Draco is so wrong. So wrong and nasty and gross. It makes me ill.
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, aside from the numerous misspellings and made up words I really do like where this is headed. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! update!!! (yes, i'm slow on the uptake, but i'm still new to adultff.net and have no clue how to go about getting alerts and whatnot)
anyways, this chapter was awesome! i wonder what draco's scheming... maybe he'll try to seduce voldemort? (and isn't that a scary thought) awwwww, he's so brave and stubborn and slytherin-like despite his horrible circumstances, i just want to give him a hug! *squeeze a draco plushie* and apparently he's got some magical gift with a capital G which is really exciting and hopefully he'll be able to use it to kick voldie's ass (not before getting some blood/torture/abuse in though, i hope... ouch, ain't that a sick and twisted thing to wish for XD)
voldemort's semi-POV was great! i agree, even though he's mad as a hatter he's still super smart and powerful and cunning so his thoughts ought to be at least somewhat organized. and i love his nicknames for draco! it's so creepy, and speaks so much about his obsession with poor draco... i wonder if he can read draco's thoughts or just his moods... i mean, this is the dark lord we're talking about... imagine his reaction if he finds out draco's a virgin *shudders in delighted horror*
anyways! love the harry and snape interaction as well! it's so like harry to run into snape without his glasses... and a protective snape is so endearing, he's a way better father than lucius, i wonder what he's going to do with this new information on draco's imminent doom. who knows, maybe he'll come up with something that may or may not require harry's help - but harry will want to help regardless, so who knows, maybe they'll actually bond over it. and i'll admit, the idea of harry going in, guns blazing (figuratively speaking) and rescuing draco from the jaws of death and sadism while draco's going "i can't see! who's my hot and dashing hero?" (lol! like he'll ever be that girly) is just pure gold.
oops, i rambled on and on and on... quantity vs. quality, i guess. lol. anyways, awesome chapter, i absolutely can't wait for the next one!
anyways, this chapter was awesome! i wonder what draco's scheming... maybe he'll try to seduce voldemort? (and isn't that a scary thought) awwwww, he's so brave and stubborn and slytherin-like despite his horrible circumstances, i just want to give him a hug! *squeeze a draco plushie* and apparently he's got some magical gift with a capital G which is really exciting and hopefully he'll be able to use it to kick voldie's ass (not before getting some blood/torture/abuse in though, i hope... ouch, ain't that a sick and twisted thing to wish for XD)
voldemort's semi-POV was great! i agree, even though he's mad as a hatter he's still super smart and powerful and cunning so his thoughts ought to be at least somewhat organized. and i love his nicknames for draco! it's so creepy, and speaks so much about his obsession with poor draco... i wonder if he can read draco's thoughts or just his moods... i mean, this is the dark lord we're talking about... imagine his reaction if he finds out draco's a virgin *shudders in delighted horror*
anyways! love the harry and snape interaction as well! it's so like harry to run into snape without his glasses... and a protective snape is so endearing, he's a way better father than lucius, i wonder what he's going to do with this new information on draco's imminent doom. who knows, maybe he'll come up with something that may or may not require harry's help - but harry will want to help regardless, so who knows, maybe they'll actually bond over it. and i'll admit, the idea of harry going in, guns blazing (figuratively speaking) and rescuing draco from the jaws of death and sadism while draco's going "i can't see! who's my hot and dashing hero?" (lol! like he'll ever be that girly) is just pure gold.
oops, i rambled on and on and on... quantity vs. quality, i guess. lol. anyways, awesome chapter, i absolutely can't wait for the next one!
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 8!!! They've got to get him out of there!!!
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun it was brilliant as usual. POOR DRACO. urgh i feel so sorry for him. I've read some stories where voldies quite sexual but those ones werent intended to be creepy/weird so yours is on an altogether higher level than theres. Wow. Freaky freaky freaky but I LOVE IT. I thought you handled Draco's thoughts brilliantly after all he's in an entirely unknown situation here. Not only is he captured but blind as well thats gotta take a lot of getting used to. Being able to come up with a plan that would work without the disibility has got to be crushing.
I liked the vision. i definitely didnt see that coming. i thought maybe remus would figure it out and tell harry i never even thought about the visions. So brilliant use of canon there. Loved it. oh and saying canon reminds me, wouldnt it have been great if sirius/remus was a bit more visible, sigh. That would have added a whole new hotness to the books. Shame. ah well thats why we have fanfic!
Liked how snape reacted and harrys subsequent reaction to snapes grab. I like how he came to the realisation, that was so in character. Loved it as always.
I liked the vision. i definitely didnt see that coming. i thought maybe remus would figure it out and tell harry i never even thought about the visions. So brilliant use of canon there. Loved it. oh and saying canon reminds me, wouldnt it have been great if sirius/remus was a bit more visible, sigh. That would have added a whole new hotness to the books. Shame. ah well thats why we have fanfic!
Liked how snape reacted and harrys subsequent reaction to snapes grab. I like how he came to the realisation, that was so in character. Loved it as always.
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun it was brilliant as usual. POOR DRACO. urgh i feel so sorry for him. I've read some stories where voldies quite sexual but those ones werent intended to be creepy/weird so yours is on an altogether higher level than theres. Wow. Freaky freaky freaky but I LOVE IT. I thought you handled Draco's thoughts brilliantly after all he's in an entirely unknown situation here. Not only is he captured but blind as well thats gotta take a lot of getting used to. Being able to come up with a plan that would work without the disibility has got to be crushing.
I liked the vision. i definitely didnt see that coming. i thought maybe remus would figure it out and tell harry i never even thought about the visions. So brilliant use of canon there. Loved it. oh and saying canon reminds me, wouldnt it have been great if sirius/remus was a bit more visible, sigh. That would have added a whole new hotness to the books. Shame. ah well thats why we have fanfic!
Liked how snape reacted and harrys subsequent reaction to snapes grab. I like how he came to the realisation, that was so in character. Loved it as always.
I liked the vision. i definitely didnt see that coming. i thought maybe remus would figure it out and tell harry i never even thought about the visions. So brilliant use of canon there. Loved it. oh and saying canon reminds me, wouldnt it have been great if sirius/remus was a bit more visible, sigh. That would have added a whole new hotness to the books. Shame. ah well thats why we have fanfic!
Liked how snape reacted and harrys subsequent reaction to snapes grab. I like how he came to the realisation, that was so in character. Loved it as always.