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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So basically I'm in LOVE with this fic, like, obsessive, stalker-y love. :}
I have the darn thing bookmarked. x']
So I guess it goes without saying that I'm looking forward to an update. ;D
I have the darn thing bookmarked. x']
So I guess it goes without saying that I'm looking forward to an update. ;D
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaawwww you make me blush hun. ^_^
I really loved this chapter though. Sirius' thoughts really brought him out as a character. And the bit with Snape I was alternatively laughing and wincing at his thoughts. Laughing at how he expresses his anger in his head and then realising oh shit maybe I shouldnt have done that. Brilliant.
And I already told you you had me tearing up with the dialogue between Sirius and Remus. It was perfect.
I really loved this chapter though. Sirius' thoughts really brought him out as a character. And the bit with Snape I was alternatively laughing and wincing at his thoughts. Laughing at how he expresses his anger in his head and then realising oh shit maybe I shouldnt have done that. Brilliant.
And I already told you you had me tearing up with the dialogue between Sirius and Remus. It was perfect.
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 11!!!!
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. I like the plot and it's kept me interested. I've just finished the last Harry/Draco story I was really interested in here, and I was worried that I wouldn't find another good one. Thanks for saving me from falling out of the fandom's fic world :)
The story has an interesting plot, and I love that it has a little Sirius/Remus in it. Please update as soon as you can, I can't wait to see what happens next.
The story has an interesting plot, and I love that it has a little Sirius/Remus in it. Please update as soon as you can, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter it is definitely my favorite so dar.
I dont know who to beg you to put Sev with. I usually beg for him to go with Remus but he's taken (whines). Lol, dont really care but it definitely cant be a mary/gary sue. Gods you dont know how glad i am that he doesnt have to seduce voldie. I mean ew, the draco attraction is bloody scarring enough. I'd need a disinfectant wipe for my brain if he wanted snape too. shudders.
I loved this chapter so much. this and the last one just totally blew the story apart. I cant wait until they rescue draco, poor little sod.
I loved Harry's thoughts at the beginning, feeling helpless and not knowing what to do with himself. I loved the library and Harry's idiocy. I mean he doesnt have much luck with books does he? Screaming books and thinking/homicidal books asside, they give you paper cuts!
The grimoire thing was just weird. Perfectly written, creepy and odd. You had a great mix of 'i shouldnts' n 'maybe just one looks' in there. I speciffically loved how he ended up with it. No i wont take it he thinks while slipping it in his bloody posket. I thought that was great!
The chat with Hermione just rounded off a perfect chapter. She really put her foot in it didnt she. It might teach her to mind her own buisness for a while, a day most likely. Lol. Loved it and cant wait for the next chapter. Please please send it to me soon.
I dont know who to beg you to put Sev with. I usually beg for him to go with Remus but he's taken (whines). Lol, dont really care but it definitely cant be a mary/gary sue. Gods you dont know how glad i am that he doesnt have to seduce voldie. I mean ew, the draco attraction is bloody scarring enough. I'd need a disinfectant wipe for my brain if he wanted snape too. shudders.
I loved this chapter so much. this and the last one just totally blew the story apart. I cant wait until they rescue draco, poor little sod.
I loved Harry's thoughts at the beginning, feeling helpless and not knowing what to do with himself. I loved the library and Harry's idiocy. I mean he doesnt have much luck with books does he? Screaming books and thinking/homicidal books asside, they give you paper cuts!
The grimoire thing was just weird. Perfectly written, creepy and odd. You had a great mix of 'i shouldnts' n 'maybe just one looks' in there. I speciffically loved how he ended up with it. No i wont take it he thinks while slipping it in his bloody posket. I thought that was great!
The chat with Hermione just rounded off a perfect chapter. She really put her foot in it didnt she. It might teach her to mind her own buisness for a while, a day most likely. Lol. Loved it and cant wait for the next chapter. Please please send it to me soon.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uh oh i hope harry doesn't go dark now....
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why call him sapling? Who are they? And how can they help? Soooo need chapter 10!!!!
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok...you got me hooked :)
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, i'm french and i don't usually write review because i'm not so sure about my english, i really like your story but i can't stand to read a rape scene, for me it's totally useless but of course i know that you do everything you want with your story, it's yours, you're free, i don't have to read it. But warnings are meant for that, some people just can't stand those types of things and i think it's a matter of respect toward your readers to simply prevent them. I don't know if i'll be able to continue this wonderful story and i hope i will, but if you write a rape scene you should put the warning. Or if you can bother to e-mail me to tell me so, i shall be thankful.
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June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so... where was i? right. voldemort... and his freaky obsession with draco's hair (and everything else about draco, really). actually, draco's weird magic right now sorta reminds me of this guy in fullmetal alchemist. he can heal someone by transmuting the injured body part, but in order to do that, he has to reduce it down to tiny particles first and then create a new whole out of the chaos. the cool thing about this talent, i find, is that not only can he heal, he can destroy. he'll just grab someone's arm, do the first bit and ignore the second, and voila, the arm's blast into tiny pieces. imagine draco getting angry/scared enough to do something like that to voldemort... he he. anyways, that was just an idea, don't know if it helps, but maybe it'll get the creative brainjuices running?
and i love the pun on 'dogfather'. lame, but so appropriate! not so sure on snape's real appearance though. i mean, i really do like him the way he is, hook nose and greasy hair and all. *shrugs* ah well. it doesn't make that much of a difference. and besides, u probably need that background anyways for the plot to work (he's going to drop his glamour for some reason, right? but why! *pauses and gasps dramatically* surely he cannot be thinking of seducing his way into voldemort's private quarters?) awww, and it's so sweet of him to keep harry updated! or will harry be the one to keep him updated? i found it kind of odd of dumbledore to call him 'my boy' though. i mean, that title seemed to suit harry better... and dumbldore had always called him severus in the books and treated him like an equal/colleague.
anyways, awesome chapter, as always, can't wait to see what happens next!
and i love the pun on 'dogfather'. lame, but so appropriate! not so sure on snape's real appearance though. i mean, i really do like him the way he is, hook nose and greasy hair and all. *shrugs* ah well. it doesn't make that much of a difference. and besides, u probably need that background anyways for the plot to work (he's going to drop his glamour for some reason, right? but why! *pauses and gasps dramatically* surely he cannot be thinking of seducing his way into voldemort's private quarters?) awww, and it's so sweet of him to keep harry updated! or will harry be the one to keep him updated? i found it kind of odd of dumbledore to call him 'my boy' though. i mean, that title seemed to suit harry better... and dumbldore had always called him severus in the books and treated him like an equal/colleague.
anyways, awesome chapter, as always, can't wait to see what happens next!