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for Deathly Scream

by Hnoss

schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries* WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! I swera every time EVERY FREAKING TIME! I read the first part an I'm all smiles and laughing cause it was funny and cute with the whole Harry/Cedric *sighs* and then Viktor....possibly having a thing for Harry and maybe Ron? Now Draco most certainly has a thing for Harry. At least thats what i ascertained from the long look and blush he gave Harry but the first part was just soooo cute!...especially the whole Ron came out of the closet..."Its dark in there!" That was cute! and then....BAM! You hit me with the sad hammer. And I just feel like crying my eyes out at the injustice and unfairness of it all! HARRY WHY!!!????? Please update soon! Your story is one I truly enjoy!
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how much I look forward to reading this story. I can always plan on it making me smile and feel all warm and fuzzy inside, and then cry my eyes out only two lines later. You're doing so well, I've never read anything like this before. It makes me want to read it even more. Please you have to update soon!
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow so much happened in this chapter. The whole Ron thing made me laugh so hard, especially the journal. And the second part made me cry. I couldn't stop. I really like that Myrtle is in the story and seems to play an important role. I always liked her. It makes me very happy that Harry seems to be learning things too. Can't wait for more, please update soon.
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaah! My heart cries for Harry.....I hope Dumbledore gets whats coming! Nice chapter....every time i rea about their relationship more...I feel like I'm like intruding on them! *peeks from behind curtain to watch Harry and Cedric snog* Peeping tom.....*sigh* Update soon!
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg... you know what you're doing to me??
At the first part of the chapters it's always Warm and fuzzy...
and then in the end I could cry ;.;

I reaaaally like this story!
Very well written and it's a really unique plot!
I hope you'll write more soon ^^
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Harry loves Cedric so much! I think I will never watch GoF the same way again...I'll probably cry when you finally kill Cedric...*sobs* Thanks for the update!
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
At first I wasn't so sure if I would like this story, but after reading what's here I have come to love it and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I can't wait to see what Harry will do when he fully remembers Cedric. I think that Dumbledore was wrong to have Harry obliviated. I'm kind of glad that Trelawney is not a fraud and I just hope that Harry will be able to be friendly with, because it seems that she has the answers that he seeks. Keep up the good work and I hope that you will update again really soon. ^_^
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omfg. i really love this story. i was gonna start crying when harry woke up with amnesia. please update soon
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was so good. It makes my heart hurt just reading it. It's just so amazing I don't know how to describe it. Please write more.
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAHHHHH!! This is sooooo sad and heart breaking! I love what you did with Trlawney by the way! I always liked her! now update soon or I will turn into a banshee and scream!