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for Deathly Scream

by Hnoss

person loolupe
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You possess the wonderful gift of storytelling. I honestly hope you continue with this story. It is beautifully written, both the past and the present. While reading this, it was so easy to experience his joys, his heartbreak and his hatred. Great job.
person Rayana
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! This is AMAZING!!! Keep writing, it is very well done and a very attention capturing story.
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue this story. I love the way you write, and your shifts from the past to the present are seamless and feel so natural.
person lawchan
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
story is scary but very sweet when in the past
person Lumcer
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say your story is quite enchanting. You have quite a talent (sp?) The form in which you wrote your story was unique and cool i supose would be the word. Loved the whole past/present thing. I Truely hope there is more to this story that we will all get to read.
(I know this whole thing sounds really corny but it's like 3:32AM so sorry, but it's all true)

KCK-Lumcer
person Page
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
eh forgot to sign on this time... anyways... great chappie... this fic is so heart wrenching!!!!.... i cant wait for the next update!!... later!!!
person Jordan
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful pl write more i beg
person RJ
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I took so long... yet again you amaze me I look forward to every chapter... a masterpiece!
person Em
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There aren't enough cedric/harry's out there but out of them all yours is def. one of my favorites.

I'm really intrested to see where this is going and i hope you update soon cause i love reading it.
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just spent the entire last night reading this story, all i got to say is that i'm blown away! I'm in love love love with it. i'm begging to author to keep going!!! Don't stop.