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It's a really nice story.I love bothe Riddick and Harry Potter and it's a good chance to have both of them in the same story. I'm looking forward for the update. I really like to see Umbitch and ministry to face a Necromanger treat. It would be really funny to read.

Hey i'm willing to beta for you. Love this story and many other's like it. i'm free just send me an e-mail at jennirosebud2007@yahoo.com.

Tigeress
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okay so i just started to read this ship and i have to say that this one is amazing!
so um the next time that you update can you pweety pwease email me to let me know that you have update . my email is shadowama5678@aol.com -origional i know! so update soon can wait for more! *kisses*

Just read up to the latest chap and i say i LOVE IT! the first chapter was intriguing and kept me wanting to read more...that and the fact that Harry and Riddick together is just HOT.
Just thought I'd add my praises to the many. Awesome writing! Please don't take TOO long on the next chapter. I Can't wait for more!

teddy's going with them to helion prime? if so, is the move going to affect his lycanthropy? ... you know, since helion prime and earth have different moons and all... O.O

Dear God. I wish I had a sanity check for every time I saw you use "fallow" for "follow", because you are driving me batshit. It's spelled "follow" as in, "follow me, I'm line leader". "Fallow" is when you don't plant anything: "He let the field lie fallow." You must IMMEDIATELY go through with the "Replace" tool and change every instance of this before those of us in mental pain from this atrocious, REPEATED mistake come to murder you violently for writing 10 chapters of a story using a very wrong, senseless spelling. I think it would be better for all our sakes....

Hi, I like your story but there's a couple consistant grammical errors that I wanted to point out.
"Witch he hadn

"one fourth, (A Quarter) of a vile of calming potion in." Vile means more like something tastes bad, it is vile. A container is vial.

And this, "after relieving him of the use of his left foot" was just too good!

Gah!!!!!!!! You're EVIL!!!!EVIL I TELL YA EVIL!!!!!Why'd ya hafta end it there? Sorry I don't remember who all died. I read it the first night I got it so I forget if Draco died. lol Sure I've got several. If you've ever watched Slayers(Anime) then this might interest you. The main character in Slayers has red Hair and Maroon eyes. Harry's Mother Lily had Red Hair and Green eyes. I'm thinking of a crossover between Harry Potter and Slayers where Harry is Lina's Nephew not Petunia's and Jumblefork deliberately never told and altered their minds. SOOO....WHATDYA THINK? If you know of Gundam Wing then I've got some for them too.
Another is a Harry Potter Yu Yu Hakusho crossover. then there are a few Fast and the Furous stories I've got thought up. If you wanna know more I'll send you the info. I have yet to put the challenge on my Account here an AFF.

Question. Nothing's gunna happen to Teddy ne? Why the Bloody Hell woulnt Riddick let Harry kill that fat toad faced slut? Die whore die!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! That's it Shinigami is going to get off his lazy horny ass and kill the slut. Even if I have to bribe him with as much ASS and COCK as I can find he is going to kill her off Painfully!!!! She will die painfully though ne???? Oh Inari. I can just see him (Teddy) going to Hogwarts. He'd drive even Peeves Insane(er)LMAO!!!!! Esp[ecially if he is ANYTHING like Remus and Nymphadora( Tonks:Don't call me Nymphadora!!! Me: I'll call you what I want Nypmphadora**laughs manically**) Lmao. Will Dame Vaako die in this fic? Uhhhh I can't think now. I helped a friend move and my mums ill so I'm stressed to the max. I hope your mother is better though. Ja
Ja
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino

You are the single most evil person in ithis entire verse!

OMG how did UMBRIDGE become so devious and down right freakin nasty?! OMFG... grrr... I can't believe that she is pulling this. I mean I know she is but still! Did she not learn?!

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Riddick should have let her have it,