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hi, I don't think that you remember me, but I was one of your fans for this particulator story; I have found that your idea and writing intrigue me. i just have one question, did you abandon all your stories and most importantly this one?
if by chance you are still posting, could you possibly put me on an e-mail alert?
please and thank you

Hello, I don't know if you've found someone yet, but I'd be willing to beta this story. It's pretty alright, just some incorrect spellings (eg. fallow instead of follow, witch instead of which, etc). I have finals coming up this week and next, but after that I'm off for 3 weeks and I can go over the chapters you currently have up. Drop me an e-mail if you're interested: elliot(dot)tedra(at)gmail(dot)com (turn the (dot)s and (at) into . and @)

=)

heya
i just found you story and it

I have read a few of these crossovers before and this is the first that puts Riddick on earth with Harry instead of the other way around. As well as being after he became leader of the Necro's. The storyline is well done and everything but there are a few spelling errors that are quite consistent. Like fallowed instead of followed and the like. If you like I could Beta for you. I am by no means an expert but the little problems I can find might make it more readable for those who are irked by such things. If you are interested e-mail me at Brea45@yahoo.com

Hi, love the story and can't wait to find out what you do to the Toad-in-Pink. I would like to know when you update your story so here is my
e-mail adress: GalectiaNightshade@yahoo.com

Um, please tell me you are finishing this story?! I need more!!! I'm desperate here! I want to see the sweet Harry-Teddy moment and Harry prove he can be a good "Mommy" to their kids! At least get to the Hawt Furyan Mansex before you drop this story!!! Please???!!? I NEED AN UPDATE!!! Pwease? *adorably widened and dilated puppy eyes* I'll beg, I can do that! *gets on knees* PLEEEEEEASE!

Nour

P.s. Nothing bad happens to Teddy. Nothing bad happens to Teddy. Nothing bad happens to Teddy, right? *looks at author threateningly* Nothing bad happens to Teddy. *continues chanting into the night*

P.p.s LOL, just please update, kay? Rock my world with your awesome plotness and totally rad mansex, author chick! CHAW! Sorry, I just watched Nemo and someone made the mistake of giving ME coffee. @.@

*glare* please tell me she dies soon, before that frog-faced @$#%^ hurts anyone!

I love this fiction and i will have to wait to see the next chapter.
i would love to help you but with going to college, looking after all my pets (there are soooo many (13 in all and getting 3 more soon from the rescue) but all so cute.
but i was wondering if the toad-lady will be skinned alive by riddick and if she (toad-lady) will be found out but the ministry and all that jazz?

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great story keep going

you know, I just realized some as I reread this chapter. If Dumbles cast a spell that made Harry look like James... then when the spell is removed he'll look more like Jorrius. Does that mean he'll have red hair, since both he and Lily had it?