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for Furyan Heat

by ProfessorSibly

schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
intersting fic hope to see more soon!
person Lady FoxFire
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that is an orginal beginning! I would have never come up with that idea. So how is Riddick going to find Harry let along realize he exist?

Is Dumblejerk the reason why Harry looks so much like James?
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You need a beta, a lot. And you need to proof-read, because, seriously, "curcio"?

Other than the bad spelling and messed up wording in various places, it was a pretty good first chapter.
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy New Year. Keep up the good work and I hope you can update again soon.
person merrymowmow
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dose Riddick come in before of after 'Pitch Black'?
person alma
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome start. I love crossovers.
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Stupid Dumbledore ruining everything. Anyways can Harry not grow up at the dursleys? It makes me sad to see him abused and "seeing him look like a "skeleton". *SOB*(lol)......Keep up the good work and Hope you update soon! ^__^
person Blue Viper
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT! Can't wait to see what's next!
person Madhater
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh this story is starting out beautifully i look forward to seeing where it goes and look forward to an update soon. ^_^
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going. I can't wait for a update.