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for Furyan Heat

by ProfessorSibly

person ZaraXaos
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MEANIE!!!!! No laughing and no explianing leave a frustrated Zara MOREEEEEEEEEEE pwease I have a plushie riddick in it for u if you keep writing... I can just see the twins and riddick in a midnight visit to the dursleys am i right or wrong? keep writing or I'll sick my dogs on U after feeding them chili Or maybe I'll save tem for flamers havent decided yet

Zara
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you need a beta O_o or you should do some proof reading (although i'm not one to talk, i don't do much proofreading before i publish either..still) a few typos and some weird words that has be capitalized like Knee O_O but overall a good chapter :D, definitely looking forward to more! keep up the good work
person Sakura
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ya know, i know i already reviewed, but me gots a quick Q. is Riddick going to see Harry interact with Teddy? cuz that would be really funny to see. Harry fussing over baby Teddy then having the twins tease him about the reason he so good with kids is cause he's a sub. XDDD just a crazy thought that i had at the most unusual time... was rather odd...

oh, and i have a story idea if your interested... ^^
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that your mother is doing better. My mom is now sick. I'm taking her to 3 different specialists before her conditions gets even more worse. Your story is one of the ones that have helped me get away from the world for a few moments. This chapter was just had wonderful as your others. Keep up the good work! Update soon! PLEASE!!!
person Ayden Nightflame
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey hun, I know this is my first review despite reading diligently. I love the story, especially the screaming at Mrs. Black by 'Mione. ^-^

Anyway, question, is the Wind Witch, Vaako and/or Dame Vaako going to cause trouble?

Is the Wind Witch helping Riddick because she was ordered to, wanted to, or because she was asked?

See you on HP!
person Sakura
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sob* cliffhangers! the bane of all readers!! you are very evil... yet, i still luffs ya ^^ this is an awesome story! i love riddick/harry <3 XDDD can't wait for the next chapter!! lemme know when ya update, please. ^^
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story. MORE more More please. Until the next chapter! :)
person star101
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story. Please update, the way the story stopped is killing me. Will Riddick mate with Harry tonight? Let me know when the new chap is up.
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I simply adore you!!!! It seems that every time I read something from this fandom, I fall in love with it and this just proves it!!!! I encourage, beg, and plead with you to continue writing it.

As for the red-haired militia and Riddick, I can't help but wonder what Riddick's going to do when he finds out about their pranks... Will he utilize them in the coming chapters, and months, or will he leave that all to the Gemini twins? And, if they decide to leave (though I doubt Harry would agree to go with), will he be bringing them with? And finally, or nearly, what about Vaako? Or, at the very least, Dame Vaako? ((I vote death in excruciating manners, but, then again, I don't like her. In fact, I'm about as fond of her as I am Johns, the Blue-Eyed Devil.))

I'm sure you'll answer those questions, and many more, in the coming chapters. So, I wait with bated breath for the next chapter to arrive.....
person kallipso
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dies laughing. *Riddick and the twins gaining up on every body runs away screaming in terror. Leaving sign that reads 'update soon'*