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OMG! That f**king bitch!!! How dare she threaten Teddy!?!?

AAARRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, please tell me that SOMEONE is going to give he what she disserve? (A gruesome pain filled death, tearing her limb from limb while she is still alive. So she could feel all the pain she's inflicted on others)

Please update chapter 11 soon. ^_^

Jan

Awesome story! I've been enthralled since the first chapter!!! I hope something especially horriable happens to Dear Deloris. ^.~ *wink wink* *nudge nudge* Update soon!

great chapter! i love it! i cant belive umbridge is in this story though. I freaking hate that fat ass toad. I hope she burns in hell, or better yet Riddicks kicks her ass! it kinda sucks though cause i was really getting into the story like "whats gonna happen next! whats gonna happen next!" then you go and bloody end it! not fair!! i want to read more please!!! *gets on hands and knees to beg for more updates* PLEASE!!!!

oooh. Why ain't Umbridge in Azkaban?!?!? Is Draco alive? If so Is he going to find out about Harry? How will he react? ((It's been awhile since I read DH(((I read it ALL the first night I got it))) I was sooo pissed that soo many good people died that I don't want to remember, Either that or I was just dead tired as I drove from Alabama to pennslvani non stop just so I could get My Reserved Copy of DH lol)) Shingami and Inari had damn well Better be on Harry and Riddick's side or I'm going to have to have a LOOOOONNNNNGGGG talk with those trouble causing Immortals. ^__~
I love being Eternity^__~ I have a story Idea or Several if you're interseted. Will Harry put those baka Necromongers in their place? How about that Skanky Slutty Whore Dame Vaako? Will Haryy stay on Helion Prime or will he Visit Earth once in awhile?
Ja
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
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Eternity/Hitokiri Kuroi Shi

This was a great chapter. I wonder what Umbitch wants. Whatever it is I'm sure it want make either Harry or Riddick happy! Well, I can't wait to read the next chapter! Good luck and happy writing!

Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh.... hey wait! Riddick's with Harry! **evil grin** We're going to need popcorn and drinks for the next chapter

yay! new chapter! i've been obsessivly reloading the xover page every hour to see an update -.-' that's just sad. but it shows how much i love your story! yay! btw, this is Sakura ^^ i just finally signed into my account. now, what the hell does Umbitch want? *growl* and is Riddick going to kill her? X333

XD and the story idea, well, i posted it in the challange section of HP. It's called Lord Marshals Pet. lemme know what ya think of it. it was a plot bunny that wouldn't stop beating my beat with a carrot and i'm not sure that i can wrte a good Riddick/Harry story, so.... yea.. and since your so good at writing one coughimasuckupcough i thought you would enjoy it ^^

AHHH evil witchie umbitch is still alive?!?!?! KILLL KILL KILL can riddick pretty please kill her in the most violant way possible?? enjoy the plushie if you keep up the good work I have a harry plushie that goes with him(Dangles plushie just out of author reach) I live to make people laugh one way or the other so your welcome Also waiting very imatiantly for the next chapter

Hugs
Zara

I like the premise of the story but the horrible spelling/misused words/or sloppy typing makes the story very hard to read. I would suggest a beta or stepping back for a day after writing a chapter and re-reading what was written before posting to find all the mistakes. A work and grammar check program would do wonders too. The main characters are well thought out and I love how Harry isn't just giving in to being a submissive which just isn't him. Can't wait to see more of the Furyan come out in him.

good chapter