rate_review Reviews

First I wanna say I lurve this story. Absolutly positivly L.O.V.E it. I skipped over it sooo many times before actually reading it cos I am silly and thought "crossovers bah!!" But then on a whim I clicked it open and couldnt stop reading. You naughty author you its 2.21am here in the land of Oz and I have just finished reading your current chappie. ~TIRED~ I dont know if anyone has asked this yet but you said there will be two cots? Is one of them for Teddy? Please let it be for Teddy. Anywho just one critisism which may not be your fault or real for that matter but you keep spelling "followed" -'fallowed' and sometimes spell "which" like 'witch' Yes its such a small thing but I am a pickee of the nits. Also I love your writing style. Entertaining and easy to read without being sluggish. I don't think I've disliked a chapter yet. Though I am a little dissapointed we havent gotten to the "seriously good stuff" between Riddick and Harry yet but you just seem to make me wanna wait and savor the tension. What you do to me! *sigh* If possible message me at noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au when you update. Nellie

Oh poor Harry. Why does everything happen to him...because it makes for great stories? Oh well I rest assured that Riddick won't let anyone live that has hurt, or plans to hurt, his Harry. Keep up the good work I look forward to the next chapter.

Good chapter.

Lemon please.

You go Harry Potter, kick that toads ass. Great chapter. I was cheering at the end. Thanks!

AWWWWW here have your harry plushie!! torture the umbitch just A little bit wont You pretty please? When Are U gonna update your other story you are sooo torturing me POUT. that was a really cool twist with the whole pack thing. Two final words MORE PLEASE???


Zara Xaos

I hope you and your beta get back on good terms. This is why I just force Punki to read my idiotic drivle instead of using betas. Anywho, eh... this is wierd and don't be creeped out but Punki was wondering if your mom would be wigged if he emailed you a get well soon card to give to her... Background/explaination/side note on that: He was helping out the substitute of a kindergarden teacher friend of his(b/c the little wakko wants to be an elementary school teacher and is trying to decide on which grade to persue as he stumbles through college)anyway, his friend, the teacher, was out with something nasty, not sure what, and the class was making her get well soon cards and Punki thought of your mom for some reason and made one for her over recess and lunch... his sketch muse seems to be on vacation but his arts&crafts muse is going nuts so yeah... Umm... nothing particularly insightful or even useful from me this time... I'll try to be a more constructive and useful reviewer next chapter,k?

Not sure if my last review made it soooooo.

She needs to die.... and what exactly is she? I mean I don't know anyone who looks like a human toad. Hmmm the image of a road killed toad pops to mind

*does a happy dance of joy* Yay! *dances around shrine dedicated to the Prof* happy happy happy, you have made my morning and my day <3 it's to bad Harry didn't sic Riddick on the Umbitch toad. *sigh* so... is she going to get what's coming to her? can't wait to see when she does. her and the Dursleys... worthless lumps of flesh... and non-flesh... can Petunia be any thinner? I mean, come on, JK described her as horse looking... that's just sad!

much <3 from your coughobsessedcough fan,

Sakura ^^

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH there was no toad stomping. why was there no toad stompage. i mean harry could always clean his shoes or buy new ones. love the story and cant wait to read more and happy that your mom is doing better.