rate_review Reviews

I"m a little confused. Was she marrying him? or someone else? I thought it was after they married but then he calls her Granger. Or is that just for endeering purposes.

Also...I got a bit confused with the transition from now to back then. Since it was all run down the same it was hard to know what time you were on. Next time...write all of the flashback scenes in italicized form. That way it's easier on the eyes to know when you're coming back and forth.

Aside from all of that...I really liked this oneshot.
Looking forward for more of your fics.

Lexy

That was wonderful! I loved that it switched back and forth between past and present, and somehow I didn't think it was confusing at all to be honest. Maybe some parts I had to think about for like .002 seconds, but for the most part I thought it flowed really well. You had really smooth transitions, and the parts that weren't the present were kind of obvious because they weren't having sex lol. Lovely one shot though, especially for your first one! I hope you write more in the future.
-Alexis

I loved it. that smirk is the devil's work cos it just makes Draco even more gorgeous!

Well I enjoyed it!!!! You've got excellent writing skills xx very sexy and very witty!!!