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June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh GAWD.... this is just breath aking!
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about the story...
You know, I've come under the impression that you've been around a while
BEFORE you impressive prescence landed on my radar, with the help of
'Forgive Those who Trespass', of course.
Though I THINK I recall one other story before reading that, THEN I started
to follow your works.
ANYway, I liked this story. :-)
You don't see too many of these type of story that deal with/touch upon
Astrology, though it wasn't in-depth it was an intriguing idea.
You ought to come back to expand on something like this and see if you can do
a multi-chaptered story on it, of COURSE you'd had to do some research.
All in all, I liked it because of the fact it DOES deal with Astrology, something
that has always interested me since I was a child..and still does as an adult. I got
a few books to prove it. :-)
You know, I've come under the impression that you've been around a while
BEFORE you impressive prescence landed on my radar, with the help of
'Forgive Those who Trespass', of course.
Though I THINK I recall one other story before reading that, THEN I started
to follow your works.
ANYway, I liked this story. :-)
You don't see too many of these type of story that deal with/touch upon
Astrology, though it wasn't in-depth it was an intriguing idea.
You ought to come back to expand on something like this and see if you can do
a multi-chaptered story on it, of COURSE you'd had to do some research.
All in all, I liked it because of the fact it DOES deal with Astrology, something
that has always interested me since I was a child..and still does as an adult. I got
a few books to prove it. :-)
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great story. And again you take a request and turn it into something amazing. The Ministry controlling what Draco would be allowed to do was genius, a great way of explaining him taking such a strange direction in his life. Having them face their own limits, flaws, desires like was was also amazing as were your descriptions.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Starlight and lightning, huh? This was wonderfully played out. I especially liked the insight into Harry's thoughts as he underwent his test. I had expected that while it was Harry's test to have courage to not save Draco, that it would be Draco's test to realize he was meant to help Harry. If that makes sense. But all the same, this turned out wonderfully. I liked your dialogues with the centaurs and the bit about the nine planets (also glad you made it 9, not 8: Centaurs have it right. lol).
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful oneshot. It actually made me cry, for reasons currently unknown :P
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so frickin awesome!
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...it seems that angst is a constant element in your story...however, you use it so wise and nice...the tension between the two is so real...and I love the idea...there is always a possibility....
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've always been in love with your stories, I'm a silent reader/appreciater. I love how much you update and the thoroughness of your stories, and I'm looking forward to more. Your style has great fluidity. I think you're one of the star Harry/Draco writers out there today, thanks for getting on this archive <3.
I did notice one small error with a homonym: "The wine of near-arousal coiling throughout..." I think you meant "whine" xD? Just a small notice. Thanks again for the new story!
I did notice one small error with a homonym: "The wine of near-arousal coiling throughout..." I think you meant "whine" xD? Just a small notice. Thanks again for the new story!
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AFF decided to eat my original review. *grrr* Okay, but to the story.
This was absolutely fantastic. :D It held so much depth in its simplicity, and as always, it was extraordinarily well crafted.I love that you write with these two often, but your stories never come across as similiar. They each have their own qualities that make them so very different from one another.
This was a wonderuful read, and the recipient of the gift should feel so honored. Thanks for sharing!
This was absolutely fantastic. :D It held so much depth in its simplicity, and as always, it was extraordinarily well crafted.I love that you write with these two often, but your stories never come across as similiar. They each have their own qualities that make them so very different from one another.
This was a wonderuful read, and the recipient of the gift should feel so honored. Thanks for sharing!