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for Death Be Not Unkind

by Ms_Figg

person Queeny
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?

I've been sitting on the edge of my seat xD My butt is getting sore! Hurry up! <3
person Queeny
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, it's, interesting.
person Muffy
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH . My. Goodness! Hee! Thanks for the update.
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione's a bitch. Hermione's a bitch. Hermione's a bitch. Hermione's a bitch.
What she did was horrible. What she did was horrible. What she did was horrible...

If I keep reminding myself, I think I'll be okay with what Severus is going to do. It takes some time to be able to associate the name "Hermione" with such a warped creature, but I've gotsta do it. Or else I'll be thouroughly squicked...

Severus deserves revenge. Severus deserves revenge. Severus deserves revenge...
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Marcus, you cad! He's always up to something, isn't he? :) This is quite a different story for you so far, but I definitely like it. I'm excited to see more of angry, vengeful, sexy Sev. (Isn't he sexy pretty much no matter what though?) Go Ms_Figg!
person Anon
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Melissa
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah ha! Freckled ass... that was priceless. And I apologize for the earlier misunderstanding, when I said "alternate Hermione", I meant this villainess we see here, not the Potion's Mistress. Anyway, I'm already enjoying this story, it's too late to turn back, I'm hooked. I feel bad for Snape, a lot of people assume virginity is only supposed to mean something for the girls, but it means quite a bit to the men taking it too. I just thought of it as an unfortunate bit of pain I had to go through before I got to the good stuff, but the boy thought it meant we were connected or something. I'm wondering why she obliviated Krum... is there more to that story? I'm guessing there's also more to her hatred of Snape, and her deception with Ron, unless she just likes to have the utmost control over her life and relationships. I doubt Sister Death will have much luck convincing Snape to leave her alone, I don't know if I'd forfeight eternal rest, but I'd be pretty damn pissed. Over the potion, though, more than the lies. The potion is what messed with his mind, that's what lead to his death. The other deceptions are unforgivable, but can be overlooked in lieu of the major crime he's suffered at her hand. Your right about the darkness of canon Hermione, though, she certainly did have a mean streak. In the beginning I favoured her as a character, as a kindred spirit. She appeared intelligent, well read, and was a muggleborn excited over this new world, anxious to learn all she could. I kinda lost my affection for her somewhere along the way; at one point I preferred Ron (a clown, breaking tension and saying the wrong thing.) and then I began liking the villains, although that might have something to do with Acciobrain. Actually, I never considered Snape much more than misunderstood, and probably a great teacher if you could forgo all the "hurt feelings" etc etc and focus on the information. Not until I found this amazing little thing called fan fiction, anyway, while looking for something to read on the internet. I think it was Hermione's self righteousness that turned me off, I can't stand that, though I'm seeing it here. (It helps make her a better villain! ^^) When someone's convinced they're right, and refuses to listen or consider other people's feeling or perspective. That is actively being ignorant, as far as I'm concerned, but it's the false sense of claim that just makes it too much to bear. Crap, I
person Tenar10r
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WICKED!
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ron Weasley's freckled ass! What a way to bring in the new year. Dee is quite the Peeping Tom isn't she? I noticed she stayed for a tad longer then Snape. Tut, tut. Maybe Snape will notice her womanly curves and they'll spend their ever after singing duets amongst other things. Is is possible for them to shag? Are you really prepared to go there with Ruth... err, I mean Dee? Too funny.
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind you taking your time, as long as you finish... I love dark tales.