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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon to see what Severus does when they get back to the cottage.
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December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved this chapter. I never thought I'd read something that had the lyrics to an old Bay City Rollers song. I was a huge fan during my youth...sigh...memories!!! Great story so far.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like the way this story is going! Nothing much to comment on except you use the word 'Fall' instead of 'Autumn' I know both terms are correct but if you want to write in the british vein for of course british people I'd use 'Autumn' I doubt people like Snape would use an American terminology.
Anyway great work. Please email me at ratscentral@hotmail.com when you post the next chapter I'd love to see where this story goes!
Anyway great work. Please email me at ratscentral@hotmail.com when you post the next chapter I'd love to see where this story goes!
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon to see if Hermione can get the Professor to become interested in her.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This interesting and different from some others that I have read. Cant wait for more.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Thanks for writing. They say to say something constructive in a review, so my constructive thing is: it should be "should have known better" not "should of known better." Thanks!
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! i love how you've written Hermione, she's so...i dont know the word for it. like one of those women in the old movies that knows exactually what she wants and is going to get it, screw the others. And Snape rolling his own...be still my beating heart!!
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December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.