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for The Seaside Retreat

by AeroCherry

person amd2175
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! The tape sounds like something my brother does, we beat each other up and the person that loses has to wrap our Mom's gifts...this year I won because I fight dirty...If I ever become an Aunt I will be impressed! I miss Tiny Toons! Now I feel old though, esp since I can remember the words to the song.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person amd2175
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a GREAT first story! I love the ideas, though it would be interesting if Draco started to "develop feelings for Hermione". You know transference? He gets feelings for her because he feels as if in a way she has saved him, not quite hero worship but what happens to psychologists a lot...just a thought, don't want to ruin what you have planned but alas there's an idea.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please tell me that Draco, Blaize , and Millie are being honest about this, "house union"!! I'm not asking for long life friendships, but at least, some respect between them! I do believe that that was JK's failure, she did nothing to win or change, the prejudice that started the war! In the end nothing changed, many died, but prejudice stayed..and Harry and Ron were the worst at it!!I'm enjoying your story very much!
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more to see how her get together with all of her friends and Draco's friends goes. I hope that they all get along.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter. I think it would be a great if you do write in the drunken threesome, even if it is just a one time thing. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gee you're good! I very much liked reading the chapters you posted since my last review. Keep it up!
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed for a bit, but I've been sick and am now just catching up. You seem to be doing much better, a bit freer in your writing. I hope you are enjoying yourself.
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I liked the way Hermione and Severus both came up with the idea of making her an apprentice so that they could be together. I can't wait to read more soon.